Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 26 Nov 2014 at 02:26

Japanese

J-Grarbのシステム上、ロッドの金額が修正できなかったので。
振込手数料分を値引きしたよ。

さっき送った総額で大丈夫なら購入手続きをお願いします。

English

Based on J-Grarb system, it was enable to update the rod price.
I have given you a discount of the bank transfer fee.

If the total price indicated last time is ok, please complete the transaction process.

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[deleted user] rated this translation result as 27 Nov 2014 at 02:54

original
Based on J-Grarb system, it was enable to update the rod price.
I have given you a discount of the bank transfer fee.

If the total price indicated last time is ok, please complete the transaction process.

corrected
Based on [usage] J-Grarb system, it was enable [parts of speech confusion] to update the rod price, so I have given you a discount of [wrong proposition] the bank transfer fee.

If the total price indicated last time is ok, please complete the transaction process.

The first sentence does not make sense, as "enable" means "to make possible."

nmuranaka1 nmuranaka1 27 Nov 2014 at 03:57

Thank you very much for the revise and suggestions. I will pay more attention and keep learning. Thank you again.

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