Translator Reviews ( English → Japanese )

English

また自転車ぶつけられた..
みんな私が好きなの？！
なんでぶつかってくるの..
警察だ救急車だの大騒ぎ！
【Shoko空飛びました】また病院通い..

Japanese

I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion such as the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.

Reviews ( 2 )

ctplers99 rated this translation result as ★★★ 31 Oct 2014 at 19:48

original
I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion such as the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.

corrected
I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion with the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.

[ctplers99]

修正した箇所のwithがwit hと離れてしまっています。申し訳ないです。コメントで訂正とさせていただきます。

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★ 01 Nov 2014 at 00:37

original
I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion such as the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)↵
I go to hospital again.

corrected
I was hit by a bicycle again...
Why people like me so much?!
Why do they hit me...
It was such a confusion as the police and ambulance came by!
[Shoko flew in the air] Now I have to attend a hospital again...

各分の最後にある... や？！といった表現はなるべく忠実に原文とそろえると良いと思います。