Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: ebay出品者です。ティーポットを送りますとお客様にメールしてしまいました。送るのはティーポットの蓋だけでよいかどうかを確認したいメールです。よろしくお願いします。

Japanese

あなたに確認したいのですが、壊れていたのはフタだけで、ティーポット本体は大丈夫ですね？
新しいティーポットをお送りするとメールしましたが、送るのはフタのみでよろしいでしょうか？
この取引に関してわたしは赤字になっているので送料を節約したいのです。
ご返信お待ちしています。
よろしくお願いします。

English

I would like to confirm with you. Is it only a lid which was broken and teapot had no damage?
I informed you that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,

Reviews ( 1 )

ilad rated this translation result as ★★★ 21 Oct 2014 at 19:54

original
I would like to confirm with you. Is it only a lid which was broken and teapot had no damage?
I informed you that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,

corrected
I would like to confirm with you. Is it only the lid which was broken and the teapot had no damage?
I informed you, by an email, that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,

一文目は、売り手、買い手双方が理解している特定の商品を指しているので、定冠詞が必要だと思います。

[wakky]

ありがとうございました。あらためて考えるとその通りです。参考になりました。