Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

今回の取引であなたが商品に満足できなくて、
私は心から謝罪したいです。

あなたがeBayのフィードバックをNegativeと
たことは、本当に残念です。

そこで、私はあなたに2つの対応を提案します。

(1)商品を航空便で返送してください。返品の送料は
商品到着後、私がお支払いたします

(2)返品しない場合、あなたに$30をプレゼントします。
フィードバックをNegativeからPositiveに変更し
ていただけたらPaypalに入金します

(1)と(2)のどちらかを選んで、私に知らせてください

English

I would like to apologize to you sincerely for you are not satisfied with the product in our business.

I'm sorry that you gave eBay Negative for feedback.

Then, there are 2 proposal.

1. Please return the product by Air mail. I will pay for the shipment as soon as the product arrived.

2. If you are not going to return the product, I will give you $30 for gift.
If you could change Negative to Positive, I will pay you via Paypall

Please inform me which one you will choose.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★ 01 Oct 2014 at 06:22

original
I would like to apologize to you sincerely for you are not satisfied with the product in our business.
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I'm sorry that you gave eBay Negative for feedback.
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Then, there are 2 proposal.

1. Please return the product by Air mail. I will pay for the shipment as soon as the product arrived.
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2. If you are not going to return the product, I will give you $30 for gift.
If you could change Negative to Positive, I will pay you via Paypall

Please inform me which one you will choose.

corrected
I would like to apologize to you sincerely for you are not satisfied with the product.
I'm sorry that you gave negative feedback on eBay.
Then, there are 2 proposals.

1. Please return the product by air mail. I will pay for the shipment as soon as the product arrived [tense confusión].
2. If you are not going to return the product, I will give you $30 for a gift.
If you could change negative to positive, I will pay you via Paypall

Please inform me which one you will choose.