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Japanese

私はこの商品を3個購入するつもりです。
この商品を日本に3個送る場合、同梱して送ることはできますか？
そのときの送料はいくらになりますか？
日本に送る場合の商品価格は1個あたりVATを除いた495.8ユーロですか、それともVATを含んだ590ユーロですか？
お返事をお待ちしています。

English

I am going to purchase 3 pieces of this item.
In case that I send 3 pieces of this item to Japan, may I send in the same box?
How much will be the shipping charge for it?

Will the price of 1 piece of the item when I send it to Japan 495.8 EURO excluding VAT?
Or will be 590 EURO including VAT?
I will wait for yoru reply.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 12 Sep 2014 at 12:31

original
I am going to purchase 3 pieces of this item.
In case that I send 3 pieces of this item to Japan, may I send in the same box?
How much will be the shipping charge for it?

Will the price of 1 piece of the item when I send it to Japan 495.8 EURO excluding VAT?
Or will be 590 EURO including VAT?
I will wait for yoru reply.

corrected
I am going to purchase 3 pieces of this item.
If you send 3 pieces of this item to Japan, can you send them all together in the same box?
How much will be the shipping charge for it?

Will the price of 1 piece of the item when I send it to Japan 495.8 EURO excluding VAT?
Or will be 590 EURO including VAT?
I will wait for your reply.

原文２行目「この商品を日本に3個送る場合、同梱して送ることはできますか？」の主語は送り主だと思います。したがって訳文では主語が「I」ではなく、「You」になるはずです。他の訳は良いと思います。

[sujiko]

ご指摘ありがとうございます。