Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 18 Aug 2014 at 12:05

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ogamai 50 岡山在住。 英語から日本語の翻訳、また英語を使っての海外とのやり取り...
Japanese

[PC] http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/BGFC.html
[MB] http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/BGFC.html
※mu-moショップでのご購入では特典は付きませんのでご注意ください。
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English

You can't get the presents if you buy the tickets from mu-mo shop. Please be careful.

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lebron_2014 52 I am a part time translator during ni...
lebron_2014 rated this translation result as ★★ 19 Aug 2014 at 13:26

original
You can't get the presents if you buy the tickets from mu-mo shop. Please be careful.

corrected
Please take note that the purchase does not include a present if bought in the mu-mo shop.

Saying "be careful" has the connotation of an untrusting shop. 付きません denotes that the present is not included/ or does not come with the purchase.

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Additional info: アーティスト名は「TOHOSHINKI」に統一下さい。
全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。