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Japanese

連絡をいただきありがとうございます。
注文をお願いする前に、一点お伺いしてもよろしいでしょうか？
私が先程注文した（商品A $1000)　の場合はいくらで販売していただけますか？
実際の注文の際には10点以上注文しますが、こちらの金額を参考に購入商品を検討したいと思います。

ご返信をいただいてから1日以内に正式な注文書をおくりますので、よろしくお願いします。

English

Thank you for contacting me.
May I ask you a question before I make an order?
How much will be the price if it was product A ($1000) which I wade the order before?
When I make an actual order, I will buy more than 10, but I want to choose products by the price.

I will send you an official order paper within one day after your response, thank you.

Reviews ( 1 )

kobayashi1989 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 20 Aug 2014 at 21:10

original
Thank you for contacting me.
May I ask you a question before I make an order?
How much will be the price if it was product A ($1000) which I wade the order before?
When I make an actual order, I will buy more than 10, but I want to choose products by the price.

I will send you an official order paper within one day after your response, thank you.

corrected
Thank you for contacting me.
May I ask you a question before I make an order?
How much will be the price if it was product A ($1000) which I just made the order?
When I make an actual order, I will buy more than 10, but I want to choose products by the price.

I will send you an official order paper within one day after your response, thank you.

文章が簡潔で、読みやすくまとまっていると感じました。先程という単語のみ気になったので、書き換えてみました。