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Japanese

お返事ありがとうございます。
それでは、Y113709294は返品させていただきますので
キャンセル処理でお願いします。
追跡番号はあとで連絡します。



返品したいので発送お願いします。
丁寧に梱包して発送してもらえればと思います。
発送後、追跡番号も教えてください。

English

Thank you for your reply.
So, please cancel the order since I will return the item.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like you to ship out since I want to return this item.
Please pack nicely with care and let me know the tracking number when you ship out.

Reviews ( 2 )

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★ 24 Jun 2014 at 08:20

original
Thank you for your reply.
So, please cancel the order since I will return the item.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like you to ship out since I want to return this item.
Please pack nicely with care and let me know the tracking number when you ship out.

corrected
Thank you for your reply.
So, please cancel the order since I will return the item.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like you to ship the item since I want to return it.
Please pack carefully and let me know the tracking number after shipment.

Nicely (with care)　だとギフトラッピングの要領で梱包してほしいと受け取られてしまうかもしれません。

[h-gruenberg]

Wrapではなくpackですので誰もギフトラッピングと間違うことはないと思いますが？また、どうしてship out がダメなのか、納得いく説明をしてください。

[susumu-fukuhara]

商品を送るはship outではなく、shipです。ship outは俗語で物事を投げ出すという意味もあるのでその意味でも避けるべきかと思います。pack nicely よりpack carefullyのほうが、より適切だと思います。船便だと輸送中に傷がつく危険が高いので梱包には非常に神経を使います。

susumu-fukuhara rated this translation result as ★★★★ 24 Jun 2014 at 13:51

original
Thank you for your reply.
So, please cancel the order since I will return the item.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like you to ship out since I want to return this item.
Please pack nicely with care and let me know the tracking number when you ship out.

corrected
Thank you for your reply.
So, please cancel the order since I will return the item.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like you to ship out the replacement since I want to return this item.
Please pack it nicely with care and let me know the tracking number when you ship out.

原文には「代替品(replacement)」が省略されていますが、英文では必要です。それを入れないと文章の意味が通りません。

[h-gruenberg]

thank you!