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Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 16 Jun 2014 at 15:24

yui701
yui701 52
Japanese

登録内容に少し間違いがあります。

我々からは3名がそのカンファレンスに参加します。
参加するメンバーは以下の通りです。

XXXX

先程、私自身の登録は指定のURLから済ませましたのでご確認ください。

English

There is a mistake about the registered content.

Three of us will participate the conference.
The members are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration is done only a while ago from the URL I was told, so please make sure about that.

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big_baby_duck 60 ほぼ、英訳専門ダックです。信頼できる優秀な英訳者、個性的でおもしろい記事を...
big_baby_duck rated this translation result as ★★★ 16 Jun 2014 at 15:54

original
There is a mistake about the registered content.

Three of us will participate the conference.
The members are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration is done only a while ago from the URL I was told, so please make sure about that.

corrected
There is a little mistake in the contents of the registration.

Three of us will participate in the conference.
The members to join are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration was done at the specified URL shortly before now, so please check it.

I hope this review is helpful. A while ago means weeks, a month, or months ago in many cases.

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