Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

私が注文したこのオーダーですが、事情によりこの品物が必要なくなりました。
本当に申し訳ないのですがこのオーダーをキャンセル（返金）できますでしょうか？
誠に勝手なお願いで申し訳ありません、返信をお願いいたします。

English

Regarding the order that I requested, I no longer need the product due to certain circumstances.
I sincerely apologize but is it possible to cancel (get a refund) this order?
I am sorry for the troublesome request but it would be great if you can reply back.

Reviews ( 1 )

chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★ 27 Mar 2014 at 16:34

original
Regarding the order that I requested, I no longer need the product due to certain circumstances.
I sincerely apologize but is it possible to cancel (get a refund) this order?
I am sorry for the troublesome request but it would be great if you can reply back.

corrected
Regarding the order that I have placed, I no longer need the product due to certain circumstances.
I sincerely apologize but is it possible to cancel (get a refund) this order?
I am sorry for the troublesome request but it would be great if you can reply back.

orderは、request というよりも、placeのほうが自然だと思います