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Rating: 52 / Native Japanese / 1 Review / 20 Feb 2014 at 15:25

3_yumie7
3_yumie7 52 英語、フランス語、スペイン語、ポルトガル語から日本語への翻訳をしています。...
Japanese

2010年より個人事業として、輸入ビジネスに従事し、
ワークブーツ、ナイフから、ビンテージランタン等の商品まで幅広く取り扱い、
工業芸術品等、商品そのものにコアなファンを持つ商材の販売経験があります。

私はこの商品を初めて見たとき、強烈なストーリーとメッセージを感じました。どこでどんなふうに作られた商品なのか、この商品に携わった人の思いが伝わってきます。斧という本来は機能的価値が重視される商品に対して、これほど多くのメッセージが伝わってくる商品は見たことがありません。

English

I am engaged in the import business as a sole proprietorship since 2010. I have handeled a wide variety of items from work boots, knives to vintage lanterns,etc,. I also have an experience of sales of items with a loyal and enthusiastic following such as industrials art works .

When I first saw this item, I felt a strong story and message. I can sense where and how it was created. I can even feel how does the producer feel. An ax is, in its nature, is an item that people focus on its functionality. I have never seen an item that appeals so many messages.

Reviews ( 1 )

chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★ 20 Feb 2014 at 19:00

original
I am engaged in the import business as a sole proprietorship since 2010. I have handeled a wide variety of items from work boots, knives to vintage lanterns,etc,. I also have an experience of sales of items with a loyal and enthusiastic following such as industrials art works .

When I first saw this item, I felt a strong story and message. I can sense where and how it was created. I can even feel how does the producer feel. An ax is, in its nature, is an item that people focus on its functionality. I have never seen an item that appeals so many messages.

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I am engaged in the import business as a sole proprietor since 2010. I have handeled a wide variety of items from work boots, knives to vintage lanterns,etc,. I also have an experience of selling items with a loyal and enthusiastic following such as industrials art works .

When I first saw this item, I felt a strong story and a message behind it. I can sense where and how it was created. I can even feel how does the producer feel. An ax is, in its nature, is an item that people focus on its functionality. I have never seen an item that appeals so many messages.

Sole proprietorship はビジネスの種類をあらわすものであり、この文章の主語がIなので、変更してみました。

3_yumie7 3_yumie7 20 Feb 2014 at 22:54

レビューをありがとうございました。大変勉強になりました。

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