Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

ご出張中にご連絡してすいません。
今週中に靴のオーダーした場合は、４月出荷になります。
それ以降に発注すると、出荷日が遅れてしまいます。
納期を優先した場合は、今週中のオーダーをお勧めします。
もし、ご出張中で、今週中の発注が難しい場合は、いつごろ発注することができますでしょうか。

English

I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

Reviews ( 2 )

o63odt rated this translation result as ★★★ 13 Feb 2014 at 20:21

original
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

corrected
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on a business trip.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the day of shipment will be delayed.
If the date of delivery is a priority, it would be better to order within this week.
If you have difficulty ordering this week because of the business trip, please let me know when will you be able to order.

cold7210 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 14 Feb 2014 at 10:27

original
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

corrected
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are out on business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, it is recommended you should order within this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?