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Japanese

お返事ありがとうございます。

昨日は私の部下が失礼なメールを送ってしまい、誠に申し訳ありませんでした。深くお詫びいたします。

あなたのネットショップの方に登録が完了しました。
私のメールアドレスは〇〇です。

今現在、XXの在庫数は９個ありますが、９個の購入でも１つ△△ドルで購入させてもらえますか？

商品名X９＝＄AA　　付加価値税（7％）＄BB　　合計金額＄CC

上記の金額で宜しければカート価格の変更をお願い致します。

〇〇より

English

Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

Reviews ( 2 )

yyokoba rated this translation result as ★★★ 18 Jan 2014 at 07:20

original
Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

corrected
Thank you for replying to my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staff members sent you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered at your online store.
My e-mail address is ○○.

You now have 9 pieces of XX in stock.
Can I still buy them for $ △△ each even if I buy 9 pieces?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any problems about the above amount, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 18 Jan 2014 at 11:22

original
Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

corrected
Thank you for your reply.

I deeply apologise that one of our staff members sent you an inappropriate e-mail yesterday.

I have already registered on your online store.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number [?].
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint [word choice] about the amount above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○