Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

離婚による子どもへの影響としては、まずは片親だけの収入になり、子育てや教育への出費が困難になる可能性が挙げられます。そのほか昨今の研究で は、親との接触時間が極端に少なくなる。環境の変化によるストレスや集中力低下のため成績が下がる。情緒不安定を引き起こす。さらに、自閉や不登校、深刻 な抑うつ状態などの非社会的な不適応行為。金品持ち出し、無断外泊、不純異性交遊などの反社会的な不適応行為などに陥るケースも指摘されています。

English

One of the possible impacts of divorce can be an economical difficulty due to less income. Some parents may find it hard to pay for expense for raising a child and education. These are the additional impacts according to the recent study. Decrease of the time to spend with parents dramatically. Drop of academic performance due to lack of concentration and stress coming from environmental change. Causing emotional instability. Unsocial behaviors such as autism, school refusal, and serious depression. Inappropriate and antisocial behaviors such as stealing money, staying out night without permission, and illicit sexual relations.

Reviews ( 1 )

smbsan rated this translation result as ★★★ 17 Dec 2013 at 11:36

Needs some more revision, but it is understandable.

[smbsan]

I am sorry. I was mistaken in my judgement. There is nothing wrong with your translation as far as I can see. Sorry for only giving you three stars.

[smbsan]

Although the second sentence does sound a bit odd. "... pay for expense for raising a child and education.". Still a good translation. Deserved at least 4 stars.