Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 商品の仕入先へのメールです。商品には青色のものと黒色のものがあります。

Japanese

説明不足で申し訳ない。私は常に注文した分は支払える準備をしてある。今回は、クレジットカードの締日の関係で「もう少し待ってもらえないか」とあなたに聞いただけである。決して注文分を支払えないというわけではなかった。私の手元の在庫は既にないので急いで注文したいのだが、今から青と黒のものをロットで注文したら何日かかるだろうか？合計40台ほど欲しい。また、あなたの手元に何台か残っているか？残っていたら私に売ってほしい。

English

I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will they take to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

Reviews ( 1 )

tani1973 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 13 Nov 2013 at 10:31

original
I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will they take to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

corrected
I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will it take them to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

少し修正しました。

[14pon]

オマケしていただいて、ありがとうございます。
どうも、この「時間がかかる」が、ここで始めてからというもの混乱をきたしていて、困ったもんです。中学レベルだっての。

[tani1973]

いえいえ。非常に分かりやすく自然な英語に感心いたしました。