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Japanese

以下の２つのＫＰＩの達成状況と、改善施策などを報告いたします。
その際、記事ごとのパフォーマンスなども報告させていただきます。

English

allow me to report these 2 below:
the KPI achievement status , improvement policy, and etc.
At the time also allow me to report the performance etc of the report article itself.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★ 02 Nov 2013 at 21:27

original
allow me to report these 2 below: ↵
the KPI achievement status , improvement policy, and etc.
At the time also allow me to report the performance etc of the report article itself.

corrected
Allow me to report the following two items: the KPI achievement status, improvement policy, and so on.
At that time, also allow me to report upon the performance and so on of the article itself.

"and etc."?? Really?