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Rating: 47 / 1 Review / 10 Oct 2013 at 22:37
以下の2つのKPIの達成状況と、改善施策などを報告いたします。
その際、記事ごとのパフォーマンスなども報告させていただきます。
allow me to report these 2 below:
the KPI achievement status , improvement policy, and etc.
At the time also allow me to report the performance etc of the report article itself.
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allow me to report these 2 below: ↵
the KPI achievement status , improvement policy, and etc.
At the time also allow me to report the performance etc of the report article itself.
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Allow me to report the following two items: the KPI achievement status, improvement policy, and so on.
At that time, also allow me to report upon the performance and so on of the article itself.
"and etc."?? Really?