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Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 11 Sep 2013 at 10:48

Japanese

・商品にロゴを入れる場合、追加の費用は必要ですか?
・シートの色をオリーブにしたいと考えていますが、見本の画像はありますか?

English

・If I want to add a logo to a product, should I pay additional charges?
・I want to use olive color in the sheet, then is there a sample picture of it?

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russ87 68
russ87 rated this translation result as ★★★ 11 Sep 2013 at 11:58

original
・If I want to add a logo to a product, should I pay additional charges?
・I want to use olive color in the sheet, then is there a sample picture of it?

corrected
・If I want to add a logo to a product, do I need to pay additional charges?
・I'm considering making the sheet color olive. Do you have any sample pictures?

First sentence: 'should' sounds voluntary,
Second sentence: "I want..." sounds too definite. They are only thinking about/considering it

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