Translator Reviews ( Japanese → Native English )

Additional info: Teacher7(T7)というサイトを運営しています。今回、新機能のお知らせを外国人の先生にメールでお知らせしたいと思っています。以下、Teacher7のサイトになります。翻訳の参考にしてください。

http://teacher7.com/
http://teacher7.com/t/

Japanese

あなたがT7にレッスンを登録すると、あなたのレッスンを、路線検索、駅検索の結果ページに表示することができます。
更に、この機能は、駅からのレッスン検索機能だけでなく、レッスンお知らせメールにも対応しました。
あなたが、レッスンを登録すると、T7は、自動的に駅を判別し、その駅近辺でレッスンを希望している
生徒にダイレクトメールでレッスンのお知らせをします。レッスンを登録すると、あなたは、多くのページで
あなたのレッスンを無料でPRすることができます。

English

When you register your lessons at T7, your lessons can appear on the results page of a route or station search.
What's more, this function isn't just for station searches, but also works with the notification email.
When you register lessons at T7, T7 automatically determines a station and notifies the students looking for lessons in that neighborhood through direct mail. With your registration on T7, you can advertise your lessons on many pages for free.

Reviews ( 1 )

lebron_2014 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 17 May 2014 at 11:59

original
When you register your lessons at T7, your lessons can appear on the results page of a route or station search.
What's more, this function isn't just for station searches, but also works with the notification email.
When you register lessons at T7, T7 automatically determines a station and notifies the students looking for lessons in that neighborhood through direct mail. With your registration on T7, you can advertise your lessons on many pages for free.

corrected
When you register your lessons at T7, your lessons will appear on the results page of a route or station search.
Furthermore, this function isn't just a station lesson search function, but also supports the lesson notification email.
When you register lessons at T7, T7 automatically determines a station and notifies the students looking for lessons in that neighborhood through direct mail. With your registration on T7, you can advertise your lessons on many pages for free.

いい感じ！！！