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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 14 Aug 2013 at 19:35

mzarco1
mzarco1 50 Hello, I am a translator/interpret...
Japanese

半額にしていただけるのであれば購入します。
それでは、S400の請求書を送ってください。
各10ドルの16本で$160ドルになります。

English

I will purchase this product if you half the price.
Please send an invoice of $400.
$10x16 will be $160.

Reviews ( 1 )

russ87 68
russ87 rated this translation result as ★★ 15 Aug 2013 at 10:42

original
I will purchase this product if you half the price.
Please send an invoice of $400.
$10x16 will be $160.

corrected
I will purchase this product if you halve the price.
Please send an invoice for the S400.
16 items at $10 each will be $160.

Fairly unnatural, try to grasp the context of the text

This review was found appropriate by 100% of translators.

mzarco1 mzarco1 15 Aug 2013 at 11:30

Thank you. I tend to mix up the prepositions so your review was a big help to me.
I will brush up on the half/halve usage as well as preps.

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