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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 14 Aug 2013 at 09:49

msongsk
msongsk 50 Hello! I've spent a year each in Kobe...
Japanese

動画タイトル：誰でも作れる可愛いキャラ弁～楽しいプール～
動画の説明：とても簡単、でも可愛くみえるキャラ弁を目指して作っています。自己満ですが、娘っこの為に頑張っています！

English

Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here was to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but my daughter looks forward to eating this every day!

Reviews ( 1 )

ziggy 60 Hi. I am a former ESL and Japanese la...
ziggy rated this translation result as ★★★★ 23 Aug 2013 at 10:38

original
Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here was to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but my daughter looks forward to eating this every day!

corrected
Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here is to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but I've been working my butt off for my daughter!

I'm not sure about "I'm bragging" here. "I don't mean to brag" may be more accurate?

msongsk msongsk 23 Aug 2013 at 22:07

That's the phrase I was looking for! Thanks, ziggy.

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