Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 53 / Native German / 1 Review / 26 Jul 2013 at 00:36

mellowgerman
mellowgerman 53 I have been translating Video Games, ...
Japanese

こんにちは。

以前、あなたに交換を依頼しました。
商品を発送しておりますので、ご確認出来次第、新しいものを発送して下さい。

宜しくお願いします!

GO

English

Good day.

I made a replacement request with you before.
The product has been sent, so please send the new one as soon as you confirm that.

Thanks in advance.

GO

Reviews ( 1 )

sputnik 55 I've studied technical translation at...
sputnik rated this translation result as ★★★★ 26 Jul 2013 at 00:54

original
Good day.

I made a replacement request with you before.
The product has been sent, so please send the new one as soon as you confirm that.

Thanks in advance.

GO

corrected
Good day.

I filed a replacement request with you earlier.
The product has been sent, so please send me the replacement one as soon as you have received it.

Thanks in advance.

GO

sounds better like this

sputnik sputnik 26 Jul 2013 at 00:55

scratch the 'one' too

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