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Japanese

私は御社の製品を、私のネットショップで販売すると同時に、amazon.co.jpでも販売したいと考えています。そのための許可をいただきたいのです。よろしくお願いします。

English

I would like to sell products from your company at my online shop and amazon.co.jp.
I would like to get a permission from your company to do so.
Thank you.

Reviews ( 1 )

shibata rated this translation result as ★★★★ 25 Jun 2013 at 08:03

original
I would like to sell products from your company at my online shop and amazon.co.jp.
I would like to get a permission from your company to do so.
Thank you.

corrected
I would like to sell products from your company at Amazon.co.jp as well as at my online shop.
I would like to get a permission from your company to do so.
Thank you.

ニュアンスの違いですが、原文から察するとAmazonで販売することを強調したいと思われたので、前のほうに持ってきました。