Translator Reviews ( Japanese → Native English )

Additional info: まるという柴犬の紹介と飼い主である私の自己紹介です

Japanese

私はまる専属のカメラマンです。
元々写真撮影が趣味でした。趣味で集めたLeicaやCaononの一眼レフカメラでまるの日常を記録し続けているうちに、柴犬の魅力をもっと世界の人に知って貰いたいと思うようになりました。柴犬の笑った表情や何気ない仕草。飼い主にしか見せない表情等、魅力が沢山あります。
あ、良い事おしえてあげましょうか。まるが毎日掘っている海岸はどこに通じているか知ってる？答えはブラジルです！遠く離れたブラジルでまるが紹介されるなんて最高に幸せ！いつかブラジルに行きたいな

English

I was a cameraman attached to Maru.
At first, taking pictures was a hobby. While I continued to document Maru's everyday life with the Leica and Caonan single lens reflex cameras in my collection, the world began to realize the charms of the shiba-inu. Like the shiba-inu's smiling face, or its casual behavior. The expressions they would only show their owners, they really had a lot of appeal.
Ah, I've only been saying the good things. Did you know where Maru was digging to, every day on the beach? Brazil! To go far away to Brazil was Maru's ultimate joy! Someday, I want to go to Brazil...

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[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★ 14 Feb 2014 at 00:34

original
I was a cameraman attached to Maru.
At first, taking pictures was a hobby. While I continued to document Maru's everyday life with the Leica and Caonan single lens reflex cameras in my collection, the world began to realize the charms of the shiba-inu. Like the shiba-inu's smiling face, or its casual behavior. The expressions they would only show their owners, they really had a lot of appeal.
Ah, I've only been saying the good things. Did you know where Maru was digging to, every day on the beach? Brazil! To go far away to Brazil was Maru's ultimate joy! Someday, I want to go to Brazil...

corrected
I am a cameraman assigned to Maru.
At first, taking pictures was a hobby. While continuing to document Maru's everyday life with the single lens reflex Leica and Caonan [sic] cameras in my collection, I began to hope the world could learn more about charms of the shiba-inu. Like the shiba-inu's smiling face, or its casual behavior. They really have a lot of appeal, such as the expressions they only show their owners, .
Ah, let me tell you something good. Do you know where Maru digs every day on the beach? The answer is Brazil! It is so amazing that Maru has been introduced in far away Brazil! Someday, I want to go to Brazil...

Many of the verb tenses were incorrect. A couple sentences did not match the meaning of the original.