Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 取引先との商談中に、複数の項目を伺ったところ、返信が滞りました。催促する文面ですが、丁寧な言い回しや表現に変えても構いません。
「やり取りが〜」の部分は早い返信がお互いの利益につながるという意図があります。
よろしくお願い致します。

Japanese

以前送ったメールの返信がまだないのでご連絡差し上げました。
複数の項目を質問しましたので、時間がかかるかと思いますが、すぐわかる項目だけでもご返信頂ければと思います。
やり取りがスムーズであればあるほど、より早く製品を販売出来ます。
ご返信お待ちしております。

English

I didn't receive a response to my last email, so I'm contacting you again.
I think it will take some time because you've inquired about several items, but it would be great if I could have a prompt response about the items you do know about.
The smoother our exchanges are, the faster we'll be able to sell the products.
I await your response.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 06 Mar 2014 at 14:45

original
I didn't receive a response to my last email, so I'm contacting you again.
I think it will take some time because you've inquired about several items, but it would be great if I could have a prompt response about the items you do know about.
The smoother our exchanges are, the faster we'll be able to sell the products.
I await your response.

corrected
I didn't receive a response to my last email, so I'm contacting you again.
I think it will take some time because I've inquired about several items, but it would be great if I could have a prompt response about the items you do know about.
The smoother our exchanges are, the faster we'll be able to sell the products.
I await your response.