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Japanese

BASEが売っているものは商品ではなく「体験」

現在、楽天に出店している店舗数は約3万9000店舗（※1）、ショッピングカート大手のカラーミーショップを導入している店舗は3万6800店舗（※2）だという。前述の通り、昨年11月末に立上がったBASEは1万5000店舗にまで伸びている。しかしこの比較は正しいだろうか。

English

BASE sales "Experience" but not item

Nowaday it's said that the number of shop in Rakuten is 39,000 (*1), and in shop introducing Color Me Shop, a major shopping cart service, is 36,800. As mentioned above, BASE, established in the end of last November, reaches 15,000. However is this comparison correct?

Reviews ( 1 )

yyokoba rated this translation result as ★★ 06 Mar 2013 at 11:03

"sales" -> "sells"
"Nowaday" -> I would go with "Currently" or "Today".
"number of shop" -> "number of shops"
"introducing" is not a good choice of word in this context. Simple "use" would work.
"reaches" -> "has reached"