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Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 05 Apr 2024 at 13:15

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[deleted user] 52 I worked for the broadcaster as an en...
Japanese

私はAと言います。日本からメッセージを送っています。

先に申し上げます、私はあなたの大ファンです。

お尋ねします。"Jack "のspare kitsをお持ちですか?
どこを探しても売り切れなんですね。とても悲しいです。

私は、"Jack Kit "をあなたから購入したいと切望しています。

あなたからの良いお返事をお待ち致しております。

突然のメッセージにも関わらず、読んでくれてありがとうございます。

English

I am "A". I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for your positive answer.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] 59 This is a Japanese freelance translat...
[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 06 Apr 2024 at 17:03

original
I am "A". I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for your positive answer.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

corrected
I am A. I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for good news front you.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

[deleted user] [deleted user] 06 Apr 2024 at 20:47

Thanks for correcting my translation. Surely,the sentence "good news" is more natural for this flow above.

[deleted user] [deleted user] 06 Apr 2024 at 20:52

Thanks for your reply. Well I need to apologize to you.
I should have typed “good news from you” instead of “good news front you”. I am sorry for such an elementary mistake.

[deleted user] [deleted user] 06 Apr 2024 at 21:31

Never mind, thank you!

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