Zachery Kayser (zkayser) — 付けたレビュー

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I saw that the glass panel "MCINTOSH C28" is out of stock now.
If you have the items, I would like to purchase 2 sheets of glass panel "MCINTOSH C28" as soon as possible.

Also, if there is no stock, when will the items come?
Does it take long time?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.

Thank you for your reply.
I will purchase 2 sheets.
Can I pay you after the glass panel arrives?
Serial number is ***.
Thank you in advance.

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I saw that the glass panel "MCINTOSH C28" is out of stock now.
If you have the items, I would like to purchase 2 sheets of glass panel "MCINTOSH C28" as soon as possible.

Also, if there is no stock, when will the items come?
Will it take a long time?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.

Thank you for your reply.
I will purchase 2 sheets.
Can I pay you after the glass panels arrive?
The serial number is ***.
Thank you in advance.

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I miss you and Denis because two of you are not in the living room.
I cherish and display the postcard from you.
In Russia is it still cold now?
I hope it gets warmer and you can enjoy cycling.
I hope I can see you soon.

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I miss seeing you and Denis in the living room.
I cherish and display the postcard I got from you.
Is it still cold in Russia now?
I hope it gets warmer and you can enjoy riding your bike.
I hope to see you soon.

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I'm so missing you and Denis, because you are not in living room.
I display your postcards preciously.
In Russia is it cold yet? I hope you can enjoy cycling in warm weather.
I hope to see you again.

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I really miss seeing you and Denis in the living room.
The postcards I got from mean a lot and I've put them upon display.
Is it cold in Russia yet? I hope you can enjoy riding your bike in warm weather soon.
I can't wait to see you again.

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Have you used your picture as the icon of the Facebook before?
I thought that I had seen it before I started to follow you.
I wonder if I am correct?
I am going to go to an English school from next month or the month after the next.
If I can speak English, I can be at higher position at the work, expand the view and what is the best is that I can speak with you.
I worried and did not have courage regarding if I can continue to learn English as it takes time and costs money. I will work hard. Would you please support me?

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Did you used to use your own picture as your Facebook icon?
I think I saw it before I started following you.
Am I mistaken?
I am thinking about starting English school either next month or the following month.
No doubt people who can speak English at work have an advantage and I'm sure it broadens your horizons, but most of all I'll be able to talk to you.
Going to an English school takes time and money, and I just couldn't sum up the courage since I was concerned whether I could keep going or not, but I think I'm going to give it my best shot! Hope you support me!