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I've already sent the product which you ordered to your designated address as below on September 15th. I sent them by using Yu mail service, so there is no tracking number.
〒xxx-xxxx(address)

You told me that you did not received yet, so I tried to confirm. Your address seems to be the one of the mail transfer company "jshoppers.com".
I made a telephone call to the jshoppers.com today, your designated address seemed to be wrong as the company said.
If the products return again, I'll let you know.

Thanks in advance,

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I've already sent the product which you ordered to your designated address as below on September 15th. I sent them by using Yu mail service, so there is no tracking number.
〒xxx-xxxx(address)

You told me that you had not received it yet, so I tried to confirm. Your address seems to be the mail transfer company "jshoppers.com".
I made a telephone call to the jshoppers.com today, your designated address seemed to be wrong as the company said.
If the products return again, I'll let you know.

Thanks in advance,

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Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule today.
(Regarding what we talked about the other day) - I am sending the endorsement from [Company Name], with details of the concert for the distribution of the newsletter.
We had a translation done by a native-speaker, but if I could receive some confirmation that would be great.
Also, for the bulletin on the day of the event, I would be grateful if we could include acknowledgements and this endorsement in both German and Japanese?
I am looking forward to meeting this November.

Best Regards,

[Name]

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Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule today.
(Regarding what we talked about the other day) - I am sending the endorsement from [Company Name], with details of the concert for the distribution of the newsletter.
We had a translation done by a native-speaker, but if I could receive some confirmation that would be great.
Also, for the program on the day of the event, I would be grateful if we could include acknowledgements and this endorsement in both German and Japanese?
I am looking forward to meeting you this November.

Best Regards,

[Name]

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Thank you for taking your time while you are busy.
(As it was told in the meeting a few days ago), we send a letter of recommendation from xx company as details of the concert for issuing the newsletter.
It was translated by native speaker. Would you check it by yourself?
In the program on the day, would you list the recommendation in Germany and Japanese as well as xx as cooperation?
We are strongly looking forward to meeting you in November.
Thank you.

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Thank you for taking your time while you are busy.
(As it was told in the meeting a few days ago), we send a letter of recommendation from xx company as details of the concert for issuing the newsletter.
It was translated by a native speaker. Would you check it by yourself?
In the program on the day, would you list the recommendation in Germany and Japanese as well as xx as cooperation?
We are strongly looking forward to meeting you in November.
Thank you.

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Thank you very much for your spending time for me, although you're so busy.
I'll send you the commendation from the company 〇 as the contents of the concert that you'll deliver in your newsletter, which we talked about the other day.
I had a native speaker translate them. I'd appreciate if you would confirm them just to make sure.
And also would you add the commendation in German and Japanese version, and the text "Supported by 〇” in the program on the day?
I'm looking forward to seeing you in November.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you very much for your spending time for me, although you're so busy.
I'll send you the commendation from the company 〇 as the contents of the concert that you'll deliver in your newsletter, which we talked about the other day.
I had a native speaker to translate them. I'd appreciate if you would confirm them just to make sure.
And also would you add the commendation in German and Japanese version, and the text "Supported by 〇” in the program on the day?
I'm looking forward to seeing you in November.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Dear Peggy,

The bank informed me that my account has received your repayment.
However, there are still short of $26.88.
Please repay this shortage.
I consulted with a credit card company about this matter because the repayment information.
The card company has confirmed these purchase and repayment procedures, and then they will do formal objection in your shop.
Your shop will cannot do any purchase by VISA that are cooperating with Japanese banks.
Please complete your repayment immediately.

Thank you in advance for your attention to your matter.

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Dear Peggy,

The bank informed me that my account has received your refund.
However, there are still a short of $26.88.
Please repay this shortage.
I consulted with a credit card company about this matter because the late repayment information.
The card company has confirmed these purchase and repayment procedures, and then they will do a formal complaint to your shop.
Your shop cannot take any purchases by VISA that cooperate with Japanese banks.
Please complete your repayment immediately.

Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter.

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Dear Peggy,
I received a call from a bank, saying that there was a refund.
But, it is $26.88 short.
Please pay the shortfall immediately.
I consulted a credit company because of a late notice of a refund and they told me that they would file a complaint because they had been able to confirm the purchase and refund process.
I would be not able to shop with a visa card that is affiliated with a bank in Japan.
Please take care of this matter as soon as possible.
Thank you.

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Dear Peggy,
I received a call from a bank, saying that there was a refund.
But, it is $26.88 short.
Please pay the shortfall immediately.
I consulted a credit company because of the late notice of the refund and they told me that they would file a complaint because they had been able to confirm the purchase and refund process.
I would not be able to shop with a visa card that is affiliated with a bank in Japan.
Please take care of this matter as soon as possible.
Thank you.

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We requested two different organs to inspect it, and there was no problem in the first, but it did not pass the second inspection.
We then analysed the problem, and because the bonding was not tight enough, there was a small tear in the sack, causing the product to oxidate.
Nagai will issue a document to the inspection organ, so that the product passes the inspection.

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We requested two different organization to inspect it, and there was no problem in the first, but it did not pass the second inspection.
We then analysed the problem, and because the bonding was not tight enough, there was a small tear in the sack, causing the product to oxidate.
Nagai will issue a document to the inspection organization, so that the product passes the inspection.

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With some experiences through tarveling, we can make more difference to other companies.
We shouldn't make travel plans of only tours or walking around tourist sites, but we should introduce some experience programs.
We can not only eat, but also with experiences. We can not only look around, but also we can experience by touching. This is a sightseeing that we want to suggest.
We made a plan of travel.
I think cycling is an item that we can sell to variety kinds of people.
I've heard that with Garuda Indonesia it is possible to use bicycles for free. It's going to be great if we can utilize it.

Hope we can start some businesses with your companies.

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With some experiences through tarveling, we can make more difference to other companies.
We shouldn't make travel plans of only tours or walking around tourist sites, but we should introduce some experience programs.
We can not only eat, but also experience. We can not only look around, but also we can experience by touching. This is a sightseeing that we want to suggest.
We made a plan of travel.
I think cycling is an item that we can sell to many kinds of people.
I've heard that with Garuda Indonesia it is possible to use bicycles for free. It's going to be great if we can utilize it.

Hope we can start some businesses with your companies.

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By including an experiment in the trip, we can make a difference from other companies.
We should include not walking around a sightseeing spot but its experiment.
We not only eat but also eat by experimenting. We not only walk around but also experiment by touching. This is exactly what we would like to provide as sightseeing.
We drew up an idea of trip.
We can sell cycling to a wide variety of people.
We heard that we can use a bicycle at free of charge at Garuda Airline.
We would love to use it.
We wonder if we can do business with your company?

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By including an experience in the trip, we can make a difference from other companies.
We should include not walking around sightseeing spots but its experience.
We not only eat but also eat by experiencing. We not only walk around but also experience by touching. This is exactly what we would like to provide as sightseeing.
We drew up an idea of trip.
We can sell a cycling tour to a wide variety of people.
We heard that we can use a bicycle at free of charge at Garuda Airline.
We would love to use it.
We wonder if we can do business with your company?

元の翻訳
The performance of DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER” in Ichikawa City Cultural Hall was finished.

DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER”
Thanks to all, I could do hot and comfortable FEVER in the performance of Ichikawa City Cultural Hall, too.

I was really happy to see each of you swinging your body as you like by tha stage.
Thank you so much

So, today Shizuoka
We are heading to perform in Act City Hamamatsu

Looking forward to seeing you all in the hall ^_^

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The performance of DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER” at Ichikawa City Cultural Hall was finished.

DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER”
Thanks to all, I could do hot and comfortable FEVER in the performance of Ichikawa City Cultural Hall, too.

I was really happy to see each of you swinging your body as you liked by tha stage.
Thank you so much

So, today Shizuoka
We are heading to perform at Act City Hamamatsu

Looking forward to seeing you all in the hall ^_^

元の翻訳
DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER” in Ichikawa City Cultural Hall performance finished

DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER”
I very much enjoyed the performance with exciting and great feeling at Ichikawa City Cultural Hall, thanks to all of you

I saw each of you having fun, dancing in your own way and I loved it
Thank you very much

Now here comes Shizuoka today
I'm going to be performing at ACTCITY HAMAMATSU

I'm looking forward to meeting you all there^_^

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DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER” in Ichikawa City Cultural Hall performance finished

DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER”
I very much enjoyed the performance with exciting and great feelings at Ichikawa City Cultural Hall, thanks to all of you

I saw each of you having fun, dancing in your own way and I loved it
Thank you very much

Now here comes Shizuoka today
I'm going to be performing at ACTCITY HAMAMATSU

I'm looking forward to meeting you all there^_^

元の翻訳
DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 "FEVER" in Ichikawa-shi Cultural Center performance ended

2015 DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR "FEVER"
Ichikawa-shi Cultural Center performance could fever hotly and comfortably thanks to you.

I was able to see from the stage that every one of you enjoys while shaking the body as you like, which was great for me; thank you so much.

Well, today it is in Shizuoka;
I do perform a LIVE in Act City Hamamatsu.

I look forward to meeting you everybody at the venue; ^_^.

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DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 "FEVER" in Ichikawa-shi Cultural Center performance ended

2015 DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR "FEVER"
Ichikawa-shi Cultural Center performance could fever hotly and comfortably thanks to you.

I was able to see from the stage that every one of you enjoyed while shaking the body as you liked, which was great for me; thank you so much.

Well, today it is in Shizuoka;
I do perform a LIVE in Act City Hamamatsu.

I look forward to meeting you everybody at the venue; ^_^.

元の翻訳
AAA was selected as a first artist in a service we can make photo albums freely "a-PRESSO"!

"a-PRESSO" is a service that you can make your own photo albums in the world by selecting official photos of the private site and writing what you want to do. In this service AAA was selected as a first artist!

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AAA was selected as the first artist in a service we can make photo albums freely "a-PRESSO"!

"a-PRESSO" is the only service that you can make your own photo albums in the world by selecting official photos of the special site and writing what you want. In this service AAA was selected as the first artist!

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AAA was decided to be an artist for the 1st series of the service "a-PRESSO" where you can make a collection of the pictures at your discretion.

It was decided that AAA is the artist of the 1st series of the service "a-PRESSO" where you can make a collection of pictures, which is the only one in the world. In this collection, you can select an official picture for the special website and write in your favorite phrase.

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AAA was confirmed be an artist for the 1st series of the service "a-PRESSO" where you can make a collection of the pictures at your discretion.

It was confirmed that AAA is the artist of the 1st series of the service "a-PRESSO" where you can make a collection of pictures, which is the only one in the world. In this collection, you can select an official picture for the special website and write in your phrases you like.

元の翻訳
KUMI KODA is also schedule to perform! Don't miss it!
*Broadcast contents are subject to change. We appreciate your understanding.

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KUMI KODA is also scheduled to appear! Don't miss it!
*Broadcast contents are subject to change. We appreciate your understanding.

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KUMI KODA will take to the airwaves. Don't miss it!

※Please note that the broadcast contents could change for certain reasons.

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KUMI KODA will be appearing. Don't miss it!

※Please note that the broadcast contents may change for certain reasons.

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Nico Nico Live "Ienomi!! Inazuma Rock Festival 2015 on the road - first night - by Takanori Nishikawa

Starts from 12:00 on September 19th (Sat)
http://live.nicovideo.jp/watch/lv234559296

In commemoration of the outdoor music festival "Inazuma Rock Festival 2015" in Shiga prefecture which he will host, Inazuma Rock Festival week will be broadcasted in 7 days in a row this year too!!

On the 6th day, Ienomi on the road version - fist night- will be broadcasted from the neighborhood of Raijin stage!

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Nico Nico Live "Ienomi!! Inazuma Rock Festival 2015 on the road - first night - by Takanori Nishikawa

Starts from 12:00 on September 19th (Sat)
http://live.nicovideo.jp/watch/lv234559296

In commemoration of the outdoor music festival "Inazuma Rock Festival 2015" in Shiga prefecture which he will host, Inazuma Rock Festival week will be broadcasted for 7 days in a row this year too!!

On the 6th day, Ienomi on the road version - first night- will be broadcasted from the neighborhood of Raijin stage!

元の翻訳
It was decided that AAA 10th Anniversary Special Outdoor Live in Fujikyu Highland is going to be broadcasted on Fuji TV Next and Next Smart!!!

The "AAA 10th Anniversary Special Outdoor Live in Fujikyu Highland" including an interview of the members is going to be broadcasted on Fuji TV Next and Next Smart at 20:00 on November 23rd (Monday and holiday).

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It is confirmed that AAA 10th Anniversary Special Outdoor Live in Fujikyu Highland is going to be broadcasted on Fuji TV Next and Next Smart!!!

The "AAA 10th Anniversary Special Outdoor Live in Fujikyu Highland" including an interview of the members is going to be broadcasted on Fuji TV Next and Next Smart at 20:00 on November 23rd (Monday and national holiday).

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Notice of exclusive on-the-spot broadcasting through the Niko Niko Namahousou(live broadcasting) of "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" !

September 23th(Wednesday / National holiday) 16:00 pm
We will present you all the final show of the "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" through on-the-spot broadcasting on the Niko Niko Namahousou!

The program is available on smartphones or mobile phones!
We really hope you would enjoy the show through the Niko Niko Namahousou in the case that you won't be able to go to the venue at the first hand on the day or missed to get a ticket.

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Notice of the exclusive broadcast on the Niko Niko Namahousou (live broadcasting) of "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" !

September 23th(Wednesday / National holiday) 16:00
We will present you all the final show of the "AAA 10th Anniversary SPECIAL Open-air LIVE in Fujikyu Highland" through on-the-spot broadcasting on the Niko Niko Namahousou!

The program is available on smartphones or mobile phones!
We really hope you will enjoy the show through the Niko Niko Namahousou in the case that won't be able to go to the place on the day or missed to get a ticket.

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Is the original of this "Pink" color item is "whitish pink in color" as its picture shows? It is quite whitish.
Or, is this a result of image processing for brightness?
If you have made image processing such as upping exposure value, I would like ask you to show me an image of the original item free from any image processing.

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Is the original of this "Pink" color item is "whitish pink in color" as its picture shows? It is quite whitish.
Or, is this a result of image processing for brightness?
If you have made image processing such as upping exposure values, I would like to ask you to show me an image of the original item free from any image processing.

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This is the result of the analysis. The orders of the keywords are by higher detection rates of Positive Control. Highlighted in green are which PRR is greater than or equal to 2 and Positive Control keywords detected more than or equal to than ? times. The result was 9. For these 9 keywords, the data we analyzed are of the primary illness of the symptom and all the medications administered. The following are the results. The symptoms were almost related to opportunistic infection, however many of the administered medications also effected to immune suppression.

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This is the result of the analysis. The orders of the keywords are by higher detection rates of Positive Control. Highlighted in green are which PRR is greater than or equal to 2 and Positive Control keywords detected more than or equal to 2. The result was 9. For these 9 keywords, the data we analyzed are of the primary illness of the symptom and all the medications administered. The following are the results. The symptoms were almost related to opportunistic infection, however many of the administered medications also effected to immune suppression.

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Here is the result of our analysis. Each terminology is placed in the order of descending rate for detection under positive control. Those with grean marker indicate those terminology with PRR more than 2 and those detected under positive control. There were 9 terminology for such cases. We analysed the 9 cases based on all the date related to underlying diseases and medications used and had their results as follows. Most of the cases had the underlying diseases that relates to opportunistic infections. Furthermore, we found also that many of medications used had immunosuppresive effect.

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Here is the result of our analysis. Each terminology is placed in the order of descending rate for detection under positive control. Those with grean marker indicate those terminology with PRR more than 2 and those detected under positive control. There were 9 terminology for such cases. We analysed the 9 cases based on all the date related to underlying symptoms and medications used and had their results as follows. Most of the cases had the underlying symptoms that relates to opportunistic infections. Furthermore, we found also that many of medications used had immunosuppresive effect.

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This is the result of the analysis. The terms are arranged in the order that the high rate of detection in each positive control. Those with a green marker was pulled are the terms with PRR 2 or more, and detected more than -- in each positive control, which counted 9 of them. And, as for the 9 cases, when added up the underlying disease of the cases and the used drugs of all data, it turned out to be as follows. Most were the cases with the underlying disease that seemed to be connected with opportunistic infection, and the used drugs were also mostly those causing immunosuppression.

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This is the result of the analysis. The terms are arranged in the order that the high rate of detection in each positive control. Those with a green marker underlined are the terms with PRR 2 or more, and detected more than -- in each positive control, which counted 9 of them. And, as for the 9 cases, when added up the underlying symptom of the cases and the used drugs of all data, it turned out to be as follows. Most were the cases with the underlying symptom that seemed to be connected with opportunistic infection, and the used drugs were also mostly those causing immunosuppression.

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This is the analysis result. Terms are sorted in descending order according to detection rate in the positive control. Where is underlined with a green marking pen indicates terms that have over 2 PRRs and are detected xx or more in each positive control. A total of nine terms were detected. For those nine terms, I aggregated all data from both primary disease cases and medicines used, and I found the result as follows. Most of the cases were that primary disease is what is believed to be associated with opportunistic infection and many of medicines used had immunosuppressive effect.

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This is the analysis result. Terms are sorted in descending order according to detection rate in the positive control. Where is underlined with a green marking pen indicates terms that have over 2 PRRs and are detected xx or more in each positive control. A total of nine terms were detected. For those nine terms, I aggregated all data from both primary symptom cases and medicines used, and I found the result as follows. Most of the cases were that primary symptom is what is believed to be associated with opportunistic infection and many of medicines used had immunosuppressive effect.

元の翻訳
I'm very sorry for the late reply this time.
My kid entered the hospital and I was with him so I couldn't check.

The item has been sent today.

I'm sorry for having kept you waiting.
I'll appreciate you if you understand me.

Also, my kid got sick and I'll be sad if I get a negative appraisal by EBay which makes my living.

Of course, I know I have the accountable but can you change it?

Thank you.

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I'm very sorry for the late reply this time.
My kid entered the hospital and I was with him so I couldn't check emails.

The item has been sent today.

I'm sorry for keeping you waiting.
I'll appreciate you if you understand me.

Also, my kid got sick and I'll be sad if I get a negative feedback on EBay which I make my living.

Of course, I know I have the accountable but can you change it?

Thank you.