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I will discuss about the payment procedure with the customer support of ebay after this weekend then respond to you.
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The product to be delivered this time is for a left handed user.
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Hello,

Thank you for your response.
I am happy to know that the product delivered without any troubles.
I will discuss the payment procedure with the customer support of ebay after this weekend then respond to you.
Thank you for your patience and also your prompt response.

The product to be delivered this time is for a left handed user.
Please do not worry as we have confirmed above with the manufacturer.

I understand and I will proceed the cancellation.
I will discuss it after this weekend with the customer support of ebay then respond to you.
Thank you for your patience.

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Even if it is only to see Rome aqueduct, it's worth to go.
I have heard it is not so easy to see Rome aqueduct from near. You can even touch Segovia aqueduct with your own hands. Avira's castle walls are also worth seeing. I went there with lunch included. Having lunch together and talking in broken english with foreigners from the same tour is not bad either. The view of Segovia's Alcazar, that is said to be the model of the castle in the movie Snow White, was beautiful.

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Even if it is only to see Rome aqueduct, it's worth to go.
I have heard it is not so easy to see Rome aqueduct closely. You can even touch Segovia aqueduct with your own hands. Avira's castle walls are also worth seeing. I went there with lunch included. Having lunch together and talking in broken english with foreigners from the same tour is also good. The view of Segovia's Alcazar, that is said to be the model of the castle in the movie Snow White, was beautiful.

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The item has been arrived.Thank you. Next, I would like to buy the item No.
Please let me know the method to order.

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The item has been arrived.Thank you. Next, I would like to buy the item No.
Please let me know how to order.

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It was simply excellent.
I used the bus thinking that it would save the transferring time to visit many sightseeing spots but it was so great that I ended up taking the whole tour forgetting to get off at where I initially wanted to!
The sun is very strong in the summer in Spain so I recommend you to take a seat on the 2nd floor under the roof. There, the wind blows so nicely while you enjoy the views of Madrid city and visiting essential sightseeing spots. Highly recommended!

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It was more than expected.
I used the bus thinking that it would save the transferring time to visit many sightseeing spots but it was so great that I ended up taking another round forgetting to get off at where I initially wanted to!
The sun is very strong in summer in Spain so I recommend you to take a seat on the 2nd floor under the roof. There, the wind blows so nicely while you enjoy the views of Madrid city and visiting essential sightseeing spots. Highly recommended!

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It was more than I expected.
I used it because I thought that it might be useful for traveling. Actually, it was so good that I went round passing by my destination.
Because the sun is so strong in summer in Spain, so I recommend you to have a seat under the roof of the second floor of the bus. I enjoyed very much because I could visiti main places in Madrid with a nice breeze!

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It was more than I expected.
I used it because I thought that it might be useful for traveling. Actually, it was so good that I went another round passing by my destination.
Because the sun is so strong in summer in Spain, so I recommend you to have a seat under the roof of the second floor of the bus. I enjoyed very much because I could visiti main places in Madrid with a nice breeze!

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It was more than I had expected.
I used the tour, as it seemed helpful to move from one place to another.
In fact, it was so nice the I went around the destination.
The sun in summer is so strong in Spain that it is recommended to sit on under the roof of the second floor of the bus.
It was nice to feel the breeze. I could really enjoy the tour, as I could go around major sightseeing spots in Madrid.

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It was more than I had expected.
I used the tour, as it seemed helpful to move from one place to another.
In fact, it was so nice that I went another round after passing the destination.
The sun in summer is so strong in Spain that it is recommended to sit under the roof of the second floor of the bus.
It was nice to feel the breeze. I could really enjoy the tour, as I could go around major sightseeing spots in Madrid.

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It's convenient.
I joined with my families in total of 6 people. It's very convenient so that we can go around Madrid effectively.
Also it was good to know the distance in town for walking the next day.
I recommend it to everyone.

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It's convenient.
I joined with my families in total of 6 people. It's very convenient so that we can go around Madrid effectively.
Also it was good to know the sense of distance in town for walking the next day.
I recommend it to everyone.

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It is convenient.
We, six family members, participated in the tour. It is very helpful, as we can see major sightseeing spots in Madrid efficiently.
It as also good to be able to understand an approximate distance to walk around the town from the next day.
I really recommend the tour.

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It is convenient.
We, six family members, participated in the tour. It was very helpful, as we could see major sightseeing spots in Madrid efficiently.
It was also good to be able to understand an approximate distance to walk around the town from the next day.
I really recommend the tour.

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Sightseeing in Madrid
There are 2 courses available that allows you to enjoy sightseeing spots effectively in Madrid. Both courses are excellent and highly recommended. You can walk around the old town or to visit the home stadium of the famous football team Real Madrid, a bullring and shopping area. You can take this bus to know where everything is in Madrid so you can plan your travel well suited to your own schedule!

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Sightseeing in Madrid
There are 2 courses available that allow you to enjoy sightseeing spots effectively in Madrid. Both courses are excellent and highly recommended. You can walk around the old town or visit the home stadium of the famous football team Real Madrid, a bullring and shopping area. You can take this bus to know where locations are in Madrid so you can plan your travel well which will be very effective !

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In liquor drinks I especially like wine, but I am not familiar with Spain produced wine. Therefore, although it is a hard-earned family trip, my father is also addicted with liquors, we both participated in the trip.
It was very fun! After looking at VTR, I visited winery and tasted wine! Besides, although is is Frecyne's hippo, th explanation is full of knowledge we haven't heard before .

Sitges was very feel like a resort. Unlike Japan, I wanted to be at the fascinating beaches of the Mediterranean forever.

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In liquor drinks I especially like wine, but I am not familiar with Spain produced wine. Therefore, although it is a hard-earned family trip, my father is also addicted to liquors, we both participated in the trip.
It was very fun! After watching a VTR, I visited winery and tasted wine! Besides, although it is Frecyne's hippo, the explanation is full of knowledge we haven't heard before .

Sitges was very feel like a resort. Unlike Japan, I wanted to be at the fascinating beaches of the Mediterranean forever.

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My favourite alcohol is wine but I didn't know well about Spanish ones. This is our family trip and we came all the way to Spain for something so my father and I decided to join the tour as my father is also a big fan of alcohol.
It was really fantastic! We watched VTR to learn the products first and then the tour and tasting. There were so many kinds of Freixenet Cavas and the stories of each products.
Sitges was a pretty much a resort town. I wanted to stay much longer at the exotic mediterranean beach which is different from the one in Japan.

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My favourite alcohol is wine but I didn't know well about Spanish ones. This is our family trip and we came all the way to Spain for something so my father and I decided to join the tour as my father is also a big fan of alcohol.
It was really fantastic! We watched VTR to learn the products first and then the tour and tasting! There were so many kinds of Freixenet Cavas and the stories of each products to know interesting about.
Sitges was pretty much a resort town. I wanted to stay much longer at the exotic mediterranean beach which is different from the one in Japan.

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I really enjoyed.

The day before using it, I could exchange my ticket and get a discount to some sightseeing places with the coupon attached to the ticket.
Also, since it regroups the places to see in Barcelona, I could enjoy the city in one day.

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I really enjoyed.

The day before using it, I could exchange my ticket and get discounts on some sightseeing places with the coupon attached to the ticket.
Also, since it included all the places to see in Barcelona, I could enjoy the city in one day.

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As there are a number of things that we cannot understand unless we manage, we would like to do business with you even if you have not carried out the business much.

What we should do to provide the high quality musical instruments in Japan to customers in Hong Kong and other countries by being ahead of rival sellers that you listed.
How we should develop the "strength" that only we have.

We would like to manage by cooperating with you.

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As there are a number of things that we cannot understand unless we manage, we would like to do business with you even though you have not carried out the business much.

What should we do to provide the high quality musical instruments in Japan to customers in Hong Kong and other countries by being ahead of rival sellers that you listed?
How w"should develop the "strength" that only we have?

We would like to manage by cooperating with you.

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4. All inquiries coming from the client after the product has been shipped would be done from your end. We will provide you with the tracking information after the shipping stage. We will handle all EMS (Japan post) matters. We will insure the full product price (purchased price of the client and not the base purchase price ) upon delivering the product.

5. The payment method for every client's purchase will be for you to transfer the money into our account and we will promptly deliver the product to the client once we have confirmed the money transfer (Product price + shipping charge + our handling fee payment).

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4. All inquiries coming from the client after the product has been shipped would be done from your end. We will provide you with the tracking information after the shipping stage. We will handle all EMS (Japan post) matters. We will insure the full product price (purchased price of the client and not the base purchase price ) upon delivering the product.

5. The payment method for every client's purchase will be for you to transfer the money into our account and we will promptly deliver the product to the client once we have confirmed the money transfer (Product price + shipping charge + our handling fee).

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Could you please provide the list of SS models for 2015?
I will decide what to order later on.
There are some items I would to purchase but the sizes are sold out.
Will there be any restock in 2015?

I'm the dealer for brand xx. Therefore this can specialized and sell under brand xx.

I would love sell the items in Japan.
I will be more than happy if you could sell the items to me at a wholesale price.

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Could you please provide the list of SS models for 2015?
I will decide what to order later on.
There are some items I would to purchase but the sizes I want are sold out.
Will there be any restocks in 2015?

I'm the dealer for brand xx. Therefore this can specialized and sell under brand xx.

I would love sell the items in Japan.
I will be more than happy if you could sell the items to me at a wholesale price.

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Ｉ inquired EMS yesterday and today.
and I submitted investigation request.
I don't have reply from your country yet.

But I researched and I got information that merchandise is still there.

Can you tell delivery post office about that.

Ｉｆ　merchandise come back here then I have to submit again.

In that case Ｉ would have to pay postage.

I wish that you firmly receive it.

Besides I would contact with you when I get information.

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Ｉ inquired EMS yesterday and today.
and I submitted investigation request.
I don't have a reply from your country yet.

But I researched and I got information that the merchandise is still there.

Can you tell your delivery post office about that.

Ｉｆ the merchandise comes back, here then I have to send it again.

In that case, Ｉ would have to pay another postage.

I wish that you firmly receive it.

I will contact you when I get further information.

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I have contacted EMS yesterday and today.
Plus, sent a request for investigation.
I have not received any answer from your country yet.

However, from what we discovered, the goods are still over there.

Could you let the delivery post office know of the above?

In case the goods get returned to us, there is no other way but to repost.

if so, we need to charge shipping cost.

We hope that you will be able to receive the parcel.

I will let you know as soon as we have further information.

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I contacted EMS yesterday and today.
And I submitted a request for investigation.
I have not received any answers from your country yet.

However, what we discovered is the goods are still over there.

Could you let the delivery post office know the information above?

In case the goods get returned to us, there is no other way but to send it again.

If so, we need to charge you another shipping cost.

We hope that you will be able to receive the parcel.

I will let you know as soon as we have further information.

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It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two place by train. The landscape from the window of the car is very beautiful, it is possible to go to both with half a day, you can go shopping to The Mall leaving baggage of Prada you buy before it in bus, you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand baggage so it's safe, and I recommend this. There was a Prada shop in The Mall as well, but I compare with SPACE, the amount of the products is different. In SPACE, there are varieties of products and very cheap!

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It was comfortable.
It was an Italy trip as a honey moon.
We joined this tour because it seemed very difficult to go to these two places by train. The landscape from the window of the car was very beautiful, it is possible to go to both in half a day, you can go shopping to the mall while leaving the Prada bag you bought before in the bus. You feel safe that you don't have to take buses and trains with lots of brand items. So I recommend this tour. There was a Prada shop in the mall as well, but if I compare with SPACE, the price of products is different. In SPACE, there are many varieties of products and they are very cheap!

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It was the first time to go to Italy and I really wanted to go to the space if I go to Firenze, and it was really nice that I could join it. The space was really spacious, and the products were displayed more neatly than I expected and it was like a Japanese outlet shop. I could buy clothes, shoes and so on at once at a same cashier, and the shop clerks were kind and they helped me choosing which to buy! They were really cheaper and I bought Prada bag, children shoes, thick cardigan, poach and it was around 100,000 yen in total. It was possible to put the baggage which I bought at the space in the car, so I was able to go for shopping light.

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It was the first time to go to Italy and I really wanted to go to the space if I go to Firenze, and it was really nice that I could join it. The space was really spacious, and the products were displayed more neatly than I expected and it was like a Japanese outlet shop. I could buy clothes, shoes and so on at once at a same cashier, and the shop clerks were kind and they helped me choosing which to buy! They were really cheaper and I bought Prada bag, children shoes, thick cardigan, poach and it was around 100,000 yen in total. It was possible to put the baggage which I bought at the space in the car, so I was able to go for shopping lightly.

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Thank you for contacting me.

Unfortunately, I am unable to fulfill your request.
Your goods will be dispatched on the January 25th at the earliest.
Please expect them to arrive in Osaka after January 26th.

My sincere apologies for the inconvenience this may cause.

I hope you enjoy your stay in Japan!

Sincerely,

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Thank you for contacting me.

Unfortunately, I am unable to fulfill your request.
Your goods will be dispatched on January 25th at the earliest.
Please expect them to arrive in Osaka after January 26th.

My sincere apologies for the inconvenience this may cause.

I hope you enjoy your stay in Japan!

Sincerely,