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I have a question for you. The kid itself before the paint is very strong color I think but is it possible to make B kit skin color more white? Please actually paint it and give me Judy's opinion. Then, I could like to order two black hair and black eye toddler next month, too. If possible, could I think again about the kit except B? After careful thinking, it might end up B again. No, no, if you cannot change B kit, then I would think another one more kit. Thank you very much always for helping me about my request kindly.

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I have a question for you. The kit itself before painted is very strong color, I think; but is it possible to make the kit B skin color more white? Please actually paint it and give me Judy's opinion. Then, I would like to order two black hair and black eye toddler next month, too. If possible, could I think again about the kits except B? After careful thinking, it might end up with B again. You say 'No, no, if you cannot change the kit B', then I would consider one more kit. Thank you very much always for helping me about my request kindly.

元の翻訳
* The advance sale will finish as soon as the amenity and the product runs out.


-TOWER RECORDS: handwritten lyric sheet(RULE ver.) *copied
*includes tower online
URL：http://tower.jp/artist/1956804/SKY-HI

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* The advance sale will finish as soon as the benefit and the product runs out.


-TOWER RECORDS: handwritten lyric sheet (RULE ver.) *printed
*includes Tower Records Online
URL：http://tower.jp/artist/1956804/SKY-HI

元の翻訳
Their 1st single waited for by the scene is both A-side single of "AIBURUMU", whose sound producer is UTA (TinyVoice, Production),
riding the bright disco truck with playfulness, and "RULE", the contrastive song expressing stoicism with HIP HOP truck!

■ Title: "AIBURUMU / RULE"
■ Release Date: August 7, 2013

[CD shop first-come benefit information] *The number of benefits is limited. It will end as soon as the stock runs out. Please note.

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The long awaited 1st single in the scene is both A-side single of "AIBURUMU", whose sound producer is UTA (TinyVoice, Production),
riding the bright disco truck with playfulness, and "RULE", the contrasting song expressing stoicism with HIP HOP track!

■ Title: "AIBURUMU / RULE"
■ Release Date: August 7, 2013

[CD shop first-come benefit information] *The number of benefits is limited. Please note it will end as soon as the stock runs out.

元の翻訳
*The reservation and purchase are at the the cash register of yukata selling space of each ITOYOKADO shop.
*You can reserve only [CD] AVCD-48733 1,260yen (tax included) (Jacket B). Please note.

★AAA Party members can get "The Other jacket" (member's solo cut)!
If you are a member of AAA party and reserve one of three types including mu-mo shop Limited Edition (except for the [music card]), you can get a limited gift ♪

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*The reservation and purchase are at the the cash register of yukata selling space of each ITOYOKADO shop.
*Please note you can reserve only [CD] AVCD-48733 1,260yen (tax included) (Jacket B).

★AAA Party members can get "The Other jacket" (member's solo cut)!
If you are a member of AAA party and reserve one of three types including mu-mo shop Limited Edition (except for the [music card]), you can get a limited gift ♪

元の翻訳
37th single "Love Is In The Air"


AAA's summer anthem that will be released during their nationwide tour for 150,000 fans!

■ Title: "Love Is In The Air"
■ Release Date: June 26, 2013
■ First Press Limited Benefits (Common with two types): Trading card (random one of all eight)
* [Music card] is excluded.


★ ITOYOKADO original benefits: Original Trading Card (one)
* The picture is different from the one of the trading card included in the product.

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37th single "Love Is In The Air"


AAA's summer anthem to be released during their nationwide tour for 150,000 fans!

■ Title: "Love Is In The Air"
■ Release Date: June 26, 2013
■ First Press Limited Benefits (Common with two types): Trading card (random one of all eight)
* [Music card] is excluded.


★ ITOYOKADO original benefits: Original Trading Card (one)
* The picture is different from the one of the trading card included in the product.

元の翻訳
I purchased it after understooding in advance that "the spool is made of wood, not of metal."
The problem is that the difference of the print design and the cloth of the product are not listed at all in the product explanation, and quite differ from the inserted photographs of ebay.
Not only "the spool was changed to be made of wood," but also it has other differences, telling that it is obviously a different thing from the inserted photographs.
As for the point of "more than two months," it is your problem, not mine, I think. So, I still demand you the refund and return of good.↵
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I purchased it after understanding in advance that "the spool is made of wood, not of metal."
The problem is that the difference of the print design and the cloth of the product is not listed at all in the product explanation, and the product is completely different from the inserted photographs of ebay.
Not only "the spool was changed to be made of wood," but also has it other differences, telling that it is obviously a different thing from the inserted photographs.
As for the point of "more than two months," it is your business, not mine, I think. So, I still demand you the refund and return of good.

元の翻訳
Good Day.

I am thinking about buying DANNER in Japan.
In that case, we are thinking of using your company as a stocking source.
I would like more information about your company's customers so please give me more information regarding the following points below.

・The largest age group which makes purchases
・The magazine which your customers subscribe to

Thank you for your help.

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Good Day.

I am thinking about selling DANNER in Japan.
In that case, we would like to ask your company as a stocking source.
I would like more information about your company's customers so please give me more information regarding the following points below.

・The largest age group which makes purchases
・The magazine which your customers subscribe to

Thank you for your help.

元の翻訳
I am sorry.

I made a mistake when writing the card number and account number.
The account number: 0030867033 that I attached before is my correct account number.

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I am sorry.

I put wrong card number and account number.
The account number: 0030867033 that I attached before is my correct account number.

元の翻訳
I could understand what you meant.
If so, Magic Eyes, Japanese maker, is infringing the trademark you possessed. Shouldn't you request to Amazon about the elimination on the product page on Amazon?
As long as this product is being sold on Amazon, I believe that people who have this product have the sales right as well.

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I could understand what you meant.
If so, Magic Eyes, Japanese maker, is infringing the trademark you possessed. Shouldn't you request to Amazon about the elimination on the product page on Amazon?
As long as this product is being sold on Amazon, I believe that we who have this product have the sales right as well.

元の翻訳
Only telling them how to do it
There is much work you cannot describe with.
People who can use only proper words are very few.
Only half of whatever you tell them can be communicated.

Only showing them how to do it
Most of work is difficult to even mimic
If the person who has the experience does, then it might look just normal action, but if the person who does not have the experience, then it will not work like that and he/she will miss the important point.

One way is limited and the idea of person who is teaching will not be communicated fast and correctly. The effective combination of various method is necessary.

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Only telling them how to do it
There is much work you cannot describe with.
People who can use only proper words are very few.
Only half of whatever you tell them can be understood collectly.

Only showing them how to do it
Most of work is difficult to even imitate.
If the person who has the experience does, then it might look just normal action, but if the person who does not have the experience, then it will not work like that and he/she will miss the important point.

One way is limited and the idea of person who is teaching will not be communicated fast and correctly. The effective combination of various methods are necessary.

元の翻訳
本日はご注文ありがとうございます。
余計な手数料を発生させない為に、Fedex　truckではなく、Fedex　Grandで発送します。
PKから何かお聞きでしょうか？
偽装会社から何か聞いていますか？
添付が、対策品となります。
梱包と計測が完了次第配送に入れます。
明日にでも、各荷物のお問合せ番号をemailで送ります。
忘れていれば、請求や、配送に関して、私どもに連絡ください。
次回のご利用お待ちしております。

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本日はご注文ありがとうございます。
余計な手数料を発生させない為に、Fedex　truckではなく、Fedex　Grandで発送します。
PKから何かお聞きでしょうか？
偽装会社から何か聞いていますか？
添付が、内訳となります。
梱包と計測が完了次第配送に入れます。
明日にでも、各荷物のお問合せ番号をemailで送ります。
請求書は郵送時に一緒にいれた方がいいか、メールの添付でいいか、その両方がいいか教えてください。
次回のご利用お待ちしております。

元の翻訳
Sorry for our delivery delay.
By our mistake, your package had retuned and we resent it.
We felt very sorry for our poor communication.

We refund the fee for the express.

Thank you for your kindly understanding.

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Sorry for the delay in the delivery.
By our mistake, your package had been returned and we resent it.
We felt very sorry for our poor communication.

We refund the express fee.

Thank you for your kindly understanding.

元の翻訳
We are deeply sorry that the delivery of the product is delayed.

We have confirmed that there was a problem with our shipping arrangements and the product came back to us once. It has already been shipped out again.

We deeply apologize that this was not communicated to you.

We will pay you back the express delivery fee.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

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We are deeply sorry that the delivery of the product is delayed.

We have confirmed that there was a problem with our shipping arrangements and the product came back to us once. It has already been shipped out again.

We deeply apologize that this was not communicated to you.

We will pay you back the express delivery fee.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Wish Olivia will be loved by everyone.
We will be thinking of you all the time and looking forward to seeing her from Japan.

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Wish Olivia will be loved by everyone.
We will be thinking of how you grow up all the time from Japan.

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お伝え頂きたいのですが、この折り紙は両面印刷されたものでしょうか？
私達は日本の折り紙をいつも入用としております。また価格は、送料込みで一枚あたり5セントに設定しております。
私達は、和紙のものを除きますが、両面印刷された折り紙を優先的に求めております。もっとも時によっては片面印刷の折り紙を購入させて頂くことも確かにございます。
私達は一週間当たりおおよそ1000枚の折り紙を使っています。 紙の大きさは5cmから12inchにわたりますが、主に使っているのは7.5cmと15cmのシートサイズのものです。
私達が作る折り紙のくす玉やモデュラー折り紙の多くは、直接に病院や養護施設の子どもたちの手に渡ります。他にも折り紙の販売もすこし行い諸費用を埋め合わせておりますが、私達は利益を求めている訳ではないのです。もし良ければ、私達のプロフィールページをご覧になって下さい。

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お伝え頂きたいのですが、この折り紙は両面印刷されたものでしょうか？
私達は日本の折り紙をいつも入用としております。また価格は、送料込みで一枚あたり5セントに設定しております。
私達は、和紙のものを除きますが、両面印刷された折り紙を優先的に求めております。もっとも時によっては片面印刷の折り紙を購入させて頂くことも確かにございます。
私達は一週間当たりおおよそ1000枚の折り紙を使っています。 紙の大きさは5cmから12inchにわたりますが、主に使っているのは7.5cmと15cmのサイズのものです。
私達が作る折り紙のくす玉や折られた折り紙の多くは、直接に病院や養護施設の子どもたちの手に渡ります。他にも折り紙の販売もすこし行い諸費用を埋め合わせておりますが、私達は利益を求めている訳ではないのです。もし良ければ、私達のプロフィールページをご覧になって下さい。

元の翻訳
The returned amount is not enough. Why do you handle it so unconscientiously?

I purchased 18 pieces from you and paid in full on the day.
However, among which, I received only 4 pieces.
Would you refund the amount for the remaining 14 pieces in full?

The total of the 14 pieces that I have not received is 2748.68 dollars.
I received 669.54 dollars from you.
So please refund the remaining 2079.14 dollars immediately.

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The returned amount is not enough. Why do you handle it so unconscientiously?

I purchased 18 pieces from you and paid in full on the day.
However, among those, I received only 4 pieces.
Would you refund the amount for the remaining 14 pieces in full?

The total of the 14 pieces that I have not received is 2748.68 dollars.
I received 669.54 dollars from you.
So please refund the remaining 2079.14 dollars immediately.

元の翻訳
①When you are performing the check, using your hands try picking it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without fail pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

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①When you are performing the check, use your hands trying to pick it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without failing to pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

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If I opened a list of products which I putted up on your site, nothing is displayed.
In case of clicking a single product, the product information is displayed.
Could you improve this?
I appreciate your cooperation.

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If I open a list of products which I put up on your site, nothing is displayed.
When clicking a single product, the product information is displayed.
Could you improve this?
I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
・Because I get little thanks for my work, I always have dissatisfaction.
・I make efforts not to do work if possible, and I am not growing at all.
・I am not enjoying my work, so I look to be displeased and unpleasant during work.
・Because I do not have dreams, girls do not have a good impression with me.
・I stop griping, and I get grateful to the people around me.
・To do meetings, broadcast, post messages, and distribute printed matters in the company facilities without the approval of the company.
・To take the article of the company without permission or use it for one's private purposes.
・A working group of Ministry of Health, Labor and Welfare demanded companies to make the prevention and solution guidance, to establish help desks and so on.
・I am a competent official.

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・Because I get little thanks for my work, I always have dissatisfaction.
・I make efforts not to do work , and I am not improving at all.
・I am not enjoying my work, so I look displeased and unpleasant during work.
・Because I do not have dreams, girls do not have a good impression with me.
・I stop griping, and I get grateful to the people around me.
・To do meetings, broadcast, post messages, and distribute printed matters in the company facilities without the approval of the company.
・To take the article of the company without permission or use it for one's private purposes.
・A working group of Ministry of Health, Labor and Welfare demanded companies to make the prevention and solution guidance, to establish help desks and so on.
・I am a competent official.

元の翻訳
The conditions leaders need;
have a future vision (target and operating conception),
have own position (role) and stance,
lead subordinates and surroundings and spread your message to the organization,
have your own strategy and design resources appropriately,
have a spirit of challenge, not afraid of the risk, be good at managing risk,
accommodate contingency flexibly, take a different turn,
solve the inconsistency occurred from environmental changes with a new concept,
make wide domestic and international networks and have a high information sensitivity,
always stay one step ahead from others and be aspirational

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The conditions leaders need;
have a future vision (target and operating conception),
have own position (role) and stance,
lead subordinates and surroundings and spread your message to the organization,
have your own strategy and design resources appropriately,
have a spirit of challenge, not afraid of the risk, be good at managing risk,
accommodate contingency flexibly, take a different direction,
solve the inconsistency occurred from environmental changes with a new concept,
make wide domestic and international networks and have a high information sensitivity,
always stay one step ahead from others and be aspirational

元の翻訳
The conditions which leaders are required are below.

To have the future vision (purpose and future image)
To have the position (role) and its stance
To manage the direction and the goal to employee and its organization
To have unique strategy and skill and also has proper resource design
To have the challenge spirit and is not afraid of risk and is good at risk management
To be flexible to manage the unexpected situation and can deal with that kind of situation
To solve the conflict which was caused environmental factor with the new concept (idea)
To have the global network and has the good informational sensitivity
To always try to improve himself/herself and be better than others

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The conditions which leaders are required are below.

To have the future vision (purpose and future image)
To have the position (role) and its stance
To manage the direction and the goal to employee and its organization
To have unique strategy and skill and also has proper resource design
To have the challenge spirit and is not afraid of risk and is good at risk management
To be flexible to manage the unexpected situation and can deal with that kind of situation by changing direction
To solve the conflict which was caused by environmental factor with the new concept (idea)
To have the global network and has the good informational sensitivity
To always try to improve himself/herself and be better than others