Yuuki N. (yuukin) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
As you can see in the attached image, your order has been shipped already.
As you ordered Standard shipping, we shipped it without a tracking number, and we don't know the delivery status in the Philippines.
Please ask the Post Office near you.
If it is not delivered due to the wrong address etc., it will be returned to our company. If that happens, I will contact you.
Thank you.

修正後
As you can see in the attached image, your order has been shipped already.
Since you ordered Standard shipping, we shipped it without a tracking number, and we don't know the delivery status in the Philippines.
Please ask your nearest post office.
If it is not delivered due to the wrong address etc., it will be returned to us. In this case, I will contact you.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
My "dreamy happy moment" is to travel. Whether it's domestic or abroad, I enjoy all process in travel. I feel happy not only when I am traveling but also when I plan it and talk about the memory of my trip. I can go for what I need to do in my everyday life owing to the excitement for the brief moment of extraordinary ecperience.

修正後
My "dreamy happy moment" is to travel. Whether it's domestic or abroad, I enjoy all process in travel. I feel happy not only when I am traveling but also when I plan it and talk about the memory of my trip. I can go for what I need to do in my everyday life owing to the excitement for the brief moment of extraordinary experience.