翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私の「夢のようなひととき」は、旅行です。日本国内、国外問わず、旅行は全ての過程において楽しみです。実際に旅行をしている時だけに限らず、旅行前の計画の段階や、旅行後の誰かに思い出を語る時までです。つかの間の非日常を楽しみに、日常のやらなければならないことを頑張れると思います。

英語

My "dreamy happy moment" is to travel. Whether it's domestic or abroad, I enjoy all process in travel. I feel happy not only when I am traveling but also when I plan it and talk about the memory of my trip. I can go for what I need to do in my everyday life owing to the excitement for the brief moment of extraordinary ecperience.

レビュー ( 1 )

yuukinはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/13 14:27:32

元の翻訳
My "dreamy happy moment" is to travel. Whether it's domestic or abroad, I enjoy all process in travel. I feel happy not only when I am traveling but also when I plan it and talk about the memory of my trip. I can go for what I need to do in my everyday life owing to the excitement for the brief moment of extraordinary ecperience.

修正後
My "dreamy happy moment" is to travel. Whether it's domestic or abroad, I enjoy all process in travel. I feel happy not only when I am traveling but also when I plan it and talk about the memory of my trip. I can go for what I need to do in my everyday life owing to the excitement for the brief moment of extraordinary experience.

良いと思います！experienceのタイプミスだけ一応修正しておきます。