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元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

Unfortunately, this product is sold only as a package,
and we cannot sell by only parts.

We're sorry for the inconvenience.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.

Unfortunately, this product is sold only as a package,
and we cannot sell by parts only.

We're sorry for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
#1 Creamy Pomodoro (Tomato-Cream Sauce)

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Creamy Pomodoro (Tomato-Cream Sauce)

元の翻訳
It 's because I'm working in a city called " " where we can find many foreigners, and I thought if I could speak English I could communicate with those people there. Also, it'd be great if I could watch movies without Japanese subtitles.

I started having interest in IT industry when I found out that if I have a knowledge of " " I can create web sites which people all around the world can see. I actually tried once and it was exciting experience.

I've been working in IT industry for about 5 years, and I think this job really fits me.
I have to say that it's hard to keep studying to follow the rapid technology advance.

修正後
It 's because I'm working in a city called " " where we can find many foreigners, and I thought if I could speak English I could communicate with those people there. Also, it'd be great if I could watch movies without Japanese subtitles.

I started having interest in IT industry when I found out that if I have a knowledge of " " I can create web sites of my own which people all around the world can see. I actually tried once and it was exciting experience.

I've been working in IT industry for about 5 years, and I think this job really fits me.
I have to say that it's hard to keep studying to follow the rapid technology advance.

元の翻訳
I translated the lines that you indicated.
I just want to mention to avoid misunderstanding that, when titles or subtitles are translated into English, it often happens that they don't sound right or nice.

So I have talked to the staff in NI Tokyo and we've decided that we leave titles and subtitles in English.

We decided to do so as we thought people would understand them even if they're written on English, and also we can keep them cool and nice in that way.

Thank you for your understanding.

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I translated the lines that you indicated.
I just want to mention [subject] to avoid misunderstanding that, when titles or subtitles are translated into English [mistranslation], it often happens that they don't sound right or nice.

So I talked to the NI Tokyo staff and we decided that we leave the titles and subtitles in English.

We decided to do so as we thought people would understand them even if they're written in English, and also we can keep them cool and nice in that way.

Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

誰かにマシンを開けてもらえるように、依頼して頂けますか？
私もあなたもエンジニアではないので、誰かに有料で依頼する必要があるなら、私の方でお支払いいたします。

ケーブルが緩んでいないかどうか確認して、もっときつく赤い輪の部分のケーブルを作れば、一つの画面だけではなく、マシンの内容がスクリーンに表示されると思います。弊社の工場から送られてきた写真を添付しますが、こちらを確認してほしいとのことです。

ご不便をおかけして申し訳ありませんが、ご確認頂ければマシンを送付頂く必要はございません。
是非一緒に解決して行きたいと考えておりますが、他に何かお考えがあれば、お知らせ頂けますでしょうか。

修正後
こんにちは。

誰かにマシンを開けるように頼めますか？
私がエンジニアではないのは知っていますよ。私もエンジニアではないので。誰かに有料で依頼する必要があるなら、私の方でお支払いします。

ケーブルが緩んでいないかどうか確認して、赤い輪の部分のケーブルをもっときつくすれば、マシンはスクリーンにはまります。写真はこの一枚に収まらなかったので、弊社の工場から写真が他にも送られてきたのですが、こちらを確認してほしいとのことです。

面倒で悪いんだけど、これで問題のマシンを送る必要は無くなったよ。
是非一緒に解決して行きたいのですが、他に何か考えがあれば知らせてください。