Yucari (yucari) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
A I purchased on 7th of Aug was damaged. ↵
The damage was found at shipping inspection when I received order.↵
It seems to be no problems to sell after replacement of the damaged area. ↵
Do you think it is possible for me to repair if you could send me dedicated tools and spares for repair? ↵
If it is not possible, I would like you to send A for free with my other orders this time.

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Regarding B, we will start selling it after we decide images of B and it's details. ↵
The B I received the other day was missing two threads which are to be connected to receiver. ↵
We had extra thread B, so we could handle thought.

I will order C, abd would like you to send it by Monday. ↵

修正後
The A I purchased on August 7 was damaged. The damage was found upon my inspection of the shipment after I received the order. It seems it will be no problem to sell the item after replacing the damaged area. If I can replace the damaged area I can sell it. If you could send me dedicated tools and spare parts for the repair would this be possible? If not, I would like you to please send A at no cost with this next order.

Regarding B, we will start selling it after we decide on its photos and detailed specifications. The B I received the other day was missing two screws for installing the receiver. We had extra screws from an unusable B, so it seemed to be no problem, but this really isn't an ideal fix.

I will order one of C, and would like you to ship it by Monday.

元の翻訳
As for me, it would be very great to have even one more bounce track in the special edition you are releasing. Would it possible? If you don't have any more songs, could you make a cover song instead? This is because I would like to have uniqueness in Japanese edition considering of price since special edition will be imported too. First of all, i would like to see parts that I can use for Japanese edition, and decide content of japanese edition, so please send me the parts.

修正後
As for me, it would be very great to have even one more bounce track in the special edition you are releasing. Would it be possible? If you don't have any more songs, could you make a cover song instead? This is because I would like to have uniqueness in Japanese edition considering of price since special edition will be imported too. First of all, i would like to see parts that I can use for Japanese edition, and decide content of Japanese edition, so please send me the parts.