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元の翻訳
We are very sorry. We sent to a wrong address by mistake. It was sent back and we are sending it again tomorrow. We are sorry but could you wait for more 4 or 5 days? If you would mind, we could accept your cancellation and fully refund your payment immediately. Could you please let us know your decision? We are sorry again. Thank you.

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We are very sorry. We shipped to a wrong address by mistake. It was sent back and we are sending it again tomorrow. We are sorry, but could you wait for 4 or 5 days? If you would mind, we could accept your cancellation and fully refund your payment immediately. Could you please let us know your decision? We are sorry again. Thank you.

元の翻訳
I appreciate the price you would like.
Before you purchase it, please understand that the stuff is used, you cannot return it and you pay the shipping charge.
When you have any question, I will answer it as much as possible.

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I sell you the item for the price you named.
Before purchase, please understand that this is an used item, it will not be accepted for return, and the shipping charge will be paid as cash on delivery.
If you have any questions, I will answer them as much as possible.

元の翻訳
I am tending to purchase three of these products.
When you ship them to Japan, is it possible to pack them together?
And then, how much would the shipping charge cost?
In case of sending to Japan, would the price of one product be 498.8 euros excluding VAT or 590 euros including VAT?
I would wait for your reply.
Thank you.

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I am tending [wrong usage] to purchase three of this product.
When you ship them to Japan, is it possible to pack them together?
And then, how much does shipping cost?
In case of sending to Japan, would the price of one product be 498.8 euros excluding VAT or 590 euros including VAT?
I would [tense confusion] wait for your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am tending to purchase three of these products.
When you ship them to Japan, is it possible to pack them together?
And then, how much would the shipping charge cost?
In case of sending to Japan, would the price of one product be 498.8 euros excluding VAT or 590 euros including VAT?
I would wait for your reply.
Thank you.

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I intend to purchase three of this product.
When you ship them to Japan, is it possible to pack them together?
In that case how much would the shipping charge cost be?
Is the shipping cost to Japan going to be 498.8 euros excluding VAT or 590 euros including VAT?
I look for ward to your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I've just finished my job.

Thank you for telling me a lot about Taiwan.
I'm glad to get much information like price or caution of sightseeing place, which I cannot get from guidebook. It really helped me.
And next, I wanna visit Singapore and am looking forward to it.

When you come to Tokyo or Kanagawa, I'll tell you every thing I know about it. Feel free to ask me!

By the way, by your profile, you seem to like Manga and Anime. What Manga or Anime do you like?
Nowadays, ..., etc. are popular in Japan.

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I've just finished my work.

Thank you for telling me a lot about Taiwan.
I'm glad to get much information like price ranges or warnings of sightseeing places, which I cannot get from a guidebook. It really helped me.
And next, I wanna visit Singapore and am looking forward to it.

When you come to Tokyo or Kanagawa, I'll tell you every thing I know about it. Feel free to ask me!

By the way, by your profile, you seem to like Manga and Anime. What Manga or Anime do you like?
Nowadays, ..., etc. are popular in Japan.