TKBAREA (tkbarea) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
My rush got worse by stresses, but it's getting better little bit by medicine and counseling.
I feel more positive than before.
My sister was glad to hear that you would send her a gift for ◯.
◯ is growing every day even though she/he was small by premature birth.

I got a message from ☆, but I couldn't reply.
I tried to draft a message, but it didn't go well. I haven't contacted with my friends from Japan for a while......

I was thinking of telling you about a limited edition of ◇.
Please look at the below for Its accessory and price. You might feel it's bit expensive!

修正後
My rash got worse due to stress, but it's getting a bit better with medicine and counseling.
I feel more positive than before.
My sister was glad to hear that you would send a gift for ◯.
◯ is growing every day even though she/he was small due to premature birth.

I got a message from ☆, but I couldn't reply.
I couldn't think of a message to write so I haven't contacted with my friends from Japan for a while......

I was thinking of telling you about the limited edition of ◇.
The accessories and pricing are as follows. It might be a bit expensive don't you think?

元の翻訳
RECOCHOKU ⇒ http://recochoku.jp/thsk/
※URL for Feature phone / Smart phone

【i-mode】iMenu > Menu list > Ring Tone/Ring Tone with movie > J-POP
【EZweb】au one > Category（Menu list） > Ring Tone > J-POP
【Yahoo! mobile phone】Menu list > Ring Tone・Video・Melody > Ring Tone

※The Distribution Start Time depends on Websites. Please check each website. Thank you.

修正後
RECOCHOKU ⇒ http://recochoku.jp/thsk/
※URL for Feature phone / Smart phone

【i-mode】iMenu > Menu list > Ring Tone/Ring Tone with movie > J-POP
【EZweb】au one > Category（Menu list） > Ring Tone > J-POP
【Yahoo! mobile phone】Menu list > Ring Tone・Video・Melody > Ring Tone

※The Distribution Start Time depends on the Websites. Please check each website. Thank you.