Angel Gomez (tenshi16) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for purchasing from this store this time.
The product was shipped from this store on August 10 by special delivery mail.
However, because it is taking more time than usual to pass through Japan's customs the shipping departed today from Japan's international airport.
In case that the shipping passes smoothly by America's custom, the shipping is arranged to arrive at your address on August 17.
I am very sorry for having you waiting for the arrival of the shipping but please wait a little longer, thank you for your comprehension.
Tracking number:
URL for the tracking :

修正後
Thank you very much for purchasing an item from us this time.
We had it shipped by express on August 10.
However, because it took more time than usual to proceed at the Japanese customs office, it the departed today from the international airport.
In case that the shipping passes smoothly by the American customs office, the shipping is scheduled to arrive at your address on August 17.
We are very sorry for having you waiting for the arrival of the shipping but please wait a little longer, thank you for your comprehension.
Tracking number:
URL for the tracking :

元の翻訳
私は品物をキープする事と返送を払いません為、返送は無意味な事と連絡したのに貴方達は注文の返金をしてしまいました！

修正後
私は返送費用を払いたくないので返送は無意味な事と連絡しました。↵
商品に不満はありますがこのまま持っていることにしていました。それなのに↵
貴方達はこの注文分への返金をしてしまいました！

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I understood the paragraph of the message
Well, I will make the full repayment so↵
please wait for a while

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
I understood the paragraph of the message.
Well, I will reimburse the full amount to you, so please wait for a while

元の翻訳
I have not made a mistake.
According to my friend, his company changed name recently.

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I am sorry, I have made mistakes many times.
According to my friend, his company changed names recently.

元の翻訳
２６日１１月にした注文ことで連絡します、私は追跡番号がないのを知ってますが情報が必定ですと告げています月末がAmazon.esの請求の締め切りですそして何かが失われたか間違っているアドレス住所に配送されたかそれともまだここに届いていないのか知りたいです。
私は注文を拒否したくないだが貴方が言った到着日のほうがもっと見積もりの到着日を知りたいですスペインに２２日十二月に届くと言いましたから。

修正後
１１月２６日にした注文の件で連絡します。私は追跡番号がないのを知ってますが情報が必要です。月末がAmazon.esの請求の締め切りです。そして商品が紛失したか間違っている住所に配送されたかそれともまだここに届いていないのか知りたいです。
私は注文を拒否したくないが貴方が言った到着日よりもっとはっきりした見積もりの到着日を知りたいです。スペインに十二月22日に届くとあなたは言いましたから。

元の翻訳
Thank you for the enquire.
I established the Best Offer so I'll count with you from there

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Thank you for the inquiry.
I established the best offer, so I would like you to proceed.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。↵
あなたが配送する前に私は買ったスネアドラムが記録のカスタムスネアの事を確認したいです。通し番号の最後にRCと書かれていましたから自信を持って買いましたそしてRCはカスタムレコーディングでした。

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こんにちは。あなたが配送する前に私が買ったスネアドラムがレコーディングカスタムのスネアかどうか確認したいです。シリアル番号の最後にRCと書かれていましたから自信を持って買いました。RCはレコーディングカスタムの意味だと判断しました。

元の翻訳
価格が正しいですが私が深刻のメｰルと言った通りあなたに提供する出来るかどうか知りません。今在荷にありません、これが一週間か二週間までです、MRがモデルを急速に配送できるか知りません。

修正後
価格は正しいですが、私が真剣なメｰルで言った通りあなたにいつ提供する出来るかは分かりません。今在庫にありませんし、1週間か2～3週間後です。MRがモデルをいつ配送してくれるか知りません。

元の翻訳
あなたが一般的な修理、レンス分けの一般処理を進みませんか？

修正後
通常通りの修理ではなく、正常なレンスの分離として扱うのがお勧めですか？

元の翻訳
分かった、品物を返しますあなたは取り上げてお金を私のアカウントに返済することができるでしょうか。

修正後
分かった、商品を返します。あなた方はそれを取りに行き、私に返金することができません。

元の翻訳
You order is currently in "Payment pending" status.
In case that your order gets canceled there is no need to make any further operation.

Regarding the concrete questions about the payment and the state of progress, I'll be happy if the enquiries about the payment settlements would be in charge of Amazon

修正後
You order is currently in the "Payment pending" status.
If you have already canceled, you do not need to make any further operation.

Regarding the concrete questions about the payment and the state of progress, I will be happy if the enquiries about the payment settlements would be in charge of Amazon.

元の翻訳
「I can not understand you, that is why let's talk more and more」
The friend that is always with me, our families or lovers to what extend talk to us with their real intentions?.↵
Our mutual hurt us,to everyone the word "separation" means fear . I think that In order to protect ourselves showing sympathy to others without difference has been a form of worldly wisdom that we rely on since the past and until now .↵
However, do we sense an uncomfortable feeling in the same way we show our fake laughter hiding our real intentions?.

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"I can not understand you, that is why let's talk more and more."
How well can we communicate with friends, family members and our boyfriends or girlfriends? There may have been some words that all of us have stopped uttering as we would fear so they would hurt each other. It looks a sensible way to live we rely on that we try to be harmonized among ourselves anytime anywhere. Still have you ever been in doubt that you keep hiding who you really are with your fake smiles?↵

元の翻訳
☆The way I experienced my home stay in Toronto☆
Because I am not a native speaker it is hard to understand English↵
Can get to enter to the circle of the family's center↵
The feeling of not being at home of the stay
And such are things that are heard a lot.

However, my Tony is different.
Tony how is living together always talks to me
Some times going to dinner with friends, playing with them.
I think I can get to experience a "At home" feeling in the stay

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☆To Those Who Have Experienced Homestay in Toronto☆
•You find it a trouble to understand English because you are not a native speaker.↵
•You cannot feel part of the host family as they tend to care their own family members •You may feel somewhat uncomfortable as a member of the host family.
We have heard these complaints so far a lot. There is no wonder as those host family members run the homestay program as their side jobs.

However, our Tony is different.
Since he now lives alone, he is a good companion to talk with.
All of the roommates sometimes eat out and play games together. and going to dinner with friends, playing with them.
We think you will experience a real friendly homestay.

元の翻訳
私はまだ領収書を届いていません。出荷が税関に在ったと言われましたが手紙、派遣の許可など届いていません。↵
また日本へ送る準備が出来ているとコメントが言われました。問題を解決ように、そしてもしまた日本へ送ったら、私にもう一度送るしかいない、送料は私が払います。ありがとうございました。

修正後
私はまだ送付物は受け取っていません。荷物が税関に在ると言われましたが通知の手紙、あるいは通関の許可証などは届いていません。日本へ送り返す準備が出来ていると言われました。問題が解決できるのでしょうか、もしまた日本へ返送されることになるのであれば私にもう一度送っていただくしかありませんが、送料は私が払います。それでは宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
①Thank you for color numbers I'll order Immediately.
Could you inform me about the adition of the item number of match products?.
I want you to show me the colors of the articles.
A
My greetings.
Thank you for always helping me with your collaboration.
②And, about the adition of this articles, If the shipping would be delayed, please don't add them.
Please think about the last month first shipping.↵

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①Thank you for the color numbers. I have placed order immediately.
Could you inform me about the item number of the additional match products?.
I would like to know the below-written products colors.
A
My greetings.
Thank you for always helping me with your collaboration.
②Beside, if shipping would be delayed due to the addition of the product, please don't add them.
Please prioritize the delivery of the product I ordered last month.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your enquiry.
In America a feet size of 9.5 would be around 27.5 in Japan.
However, width is quite different so I think it should be better if you buy a bigger one, how are the articles below 28cm)

Because I haven't seen your feet, I can not confirm that it will fit, please understand that.
If 30cm it's the case, it would be a feet size of 12 and I think it would be too big for you.
I will be happy for your examination.

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Thank you for your enquiry.
In America a feet size of 9.5 would be around 27.5 in Japan.
However, the width is quite different so I think it should be better if you buy a bigger one, how about the item of 28cm below?

Because I haven't seen your feet, I can not confirm that it will fit, please understand that.
As for the size of 30cm, it would be a feet size of 12 and I think it would be too big for you.
I would appreciate your consideration.

元の翻訳
I've been bussy with work and studies. Let's make the edit when we got time!
I got too exited moving the bar light and broke it...
Don't know if the enviroment has change since I haven't seen instagram or twitter. Let's make ir another time.

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I've been bussy [spelling] with work and studies [mistranslation]. Let's make [wrong subject] the edit when we got time!
I got too exited [?] moving the bar light and broke it...
Don't know if the enviroment [spelling] has change [tense] since I haven't seen instagram [spelling] or twitter. Let's [wrong subject] make ir [spelling] another time.