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The lot of the product has turned out to be 〇〇 from the engraved mark shown in the picture.
According to the manufacturing history, there is no issue.

I don't think the defect was made when the package was opened because the felt gasket was put on A, but don't you have the picture taken when the package was opened? (the picture showing it without the gasket etc.)

Also don't you have the picture showing the package is opened? (I would like to confirm whether the cardboard box is damaged or not and whether the bag is broken or not,)
※ The products are put in a bag respectively for each, and they are put in the cardboard box (inner box). Furthermore, four inner boxes are packed in one outer box.

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The lot of the product has turned out to be 〇〇 from the engraved mark shown in the picture.
According to the manufacturing history, there is no issue.

I don't think the defect was made when the package was opened because the felt gasket was put on A, but don't you have the picture taken when the package was opened? (the picture showing it without the gasket etc.)

Also don't you have the picture showing the package before been opened? (I would like to confirm whether the cardboard box is damaged or not and whether the bag is broken or not,)
※ The products are put in a bag respectively for each, and they are put in the cardboard box (inner box). Furthermore, four inner boxes are packed in one outer box.

元の翻訳
By taking advantage of nature with mountains around Fuji, I provide the best enjoyment.
What are the activity where we can experiment the nature and outdoor sport?↵
Mountain climbing? ↵
We can do without experience?↵
You do need this kind of question and worry.
First, please participate in it. You just enjoy it.
We have a manifest to make you enjoy it.↵
We hope that we can support you to make our life richer even a little through our program.

Please click here for the manifest to enjoy the program.

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By taking advantage of rich nature on the foot of Fuji, I provide the best enjoyment.
What are the nature experience and outdoor sport? Mountain climbing? Can I do it without experience? You don't have to ask any of these and worry.
Just Join and enjoy by yourself.
We have a manifest to make you enjoy it. We hope that we can support you to make your life richer even a little through our program.

Please click here for the manifest to enjoy the program.

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About the six packages you sent to me, four packages has arrived, but the other two hasn't arrived yet.

Tracking number 538124 has already left Germany.

But the tracking number 53812 hasn't been updated yet.

Could you contact with the shipping company?

Thank you for your support.

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About the six packages you sent to me, four packages has arrived, but the other two hasn't arrived yet.

Tracking number 538124 has already left Germany.

But the tracking number 53812 hasn't been updated yet.

Could you contact with the shipping company?

Thank you for your support.

元の翻訳
I can't believe you because what you say is different from the beginning.

I will pay $500 as soon as the goods arrive.

If it's impossible, please reduce the goods for $500 worth and send it again.

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I can't believe you because what you say is different from the beginning.

I will pay $500 as soon as the goods arrive.

If it's impossible, reduce the goods for $500 worth and send them again.

元の翻訳
I have received the product, thank you.
Please tell me the way to update the product A by Android.
Could you give me the electronic manual data and a logo picture of the product A?

Please let me ask you some questions.
Does the offered product price include shipping fee?
Would you give me a discount if I make a larger order?

Where will products be delivered from?
How long will it take to Japan if I make an order on next monday?
What is the payment method?
I hope by Paypal if possible.

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I have received the product, thank you.
Please tell me the way to update the product A by Android.
Could you give me the electronic manual data and a logo picture of the product A?

Please let me ask you some questions.
Does your quote include shipping fee?
Would you give me a discount if I make a larger order?

Where will products be delivered from?
How long will it take to Japan if I make an order on next monday?
What is the payment method?
I hope by Paypal if possible.

元の翻訳
Hi.
The product, which I sent you, couldn't reach properly. So, please let me know your address in case as I will try to send it again.
The following address is your registered one.

Thank you.

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Hi.
The product, which I sent you, couldn't reach properly. So, please let me know your address in case as I will try to send it again.
The following address is your registered one.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am going to report on the current status of trial production schedule for Company A.
Currently we are requesting the factory to produce trial sample.
① is will be completed in early August as we planned,Although I think the first trial can be done during August.,Detailed schedule is still being adjusted.
Please send the test materials below.May I ask how the test materials will be packed?
Regarding to ②,We are currently designing and calculating costs.I will submit it on Friday this week.

As Connecting pipes is common practice,I attached the drawing of another company for your reference.

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I am going to report on the current status of trial production schedule for Company A.
Currently we are requesting the factory to produce trial sample.
(1) is will be completed in early August as we planned. Although I think the first trial can be done during August, detailed schedule is still being adjusted.
Please send the test materials below.May I ask how the test materials will be packed?
Regarding to (2), we are currently designing and calculating costs.I will submit it on Friday this week.

As Connecting pipes is common practice,I attached the drawing of another company for your reference.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support.

As there was a piece of the item of infiniti from our customer and we cannot repair it in our side, we would like to offset it next time. Please refer to the picture attached.

280011 [＄24] ×1

As this item was defective, we received the spare bolts for it together,
but the defective this time is that the leg part is leaning. So replacing the bolts does not help.

Please confirm above and reply to me.

(1) The request to offset next time.

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To whom it may concern

There is a piece of the item of infiniti returned from our customer which we cannot repair. We would like you to deal with it in exchange for your handling to following issue. Please refer to the picture attached.

280011 [＄24] ×1

As this item was defective, we received the spare bolts for it together,
but the defective this time is that the leg part is leaning. So replacing the bolts does not help.

Please confirm above and reply to me.

(1) The request to offset next time.