S. N (sn08087640) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I very much appreciate your offer, but there's another shop offering me a price of $1440 for the amount of 180 including shipping to Florida.
However, I am considering purchasing from you since we have done business before.
If you can offer me the price of $1440 including shipping, I will take it.
Please consider it. Thank you.

Thank you for contacting me!
It takes 15 days, right?
OK, I will buy it from you.
I will make the payment on May 1 so send me the bill please.
Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me.
I really appreciate your offer, but there's another shop offering me the price of $1,440 for the amount of 180 including shipping fees to Florida.
However, I am considering purchasing from you since we have done business before.
If you can offer me the price of $1,440 including shipping fees, I will take it.
Please consider my proposal. Thank you.

Thank you for contacting me!
It takes 15 days, right?
OK, I will buy it from you.
I will make the payment on May 1 so send me the bill please.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry that we cannot increase the minimum order amount.
We will certainly order autum-winter items next time, so we decided to cancel ordering the spring-summer items this time.
From now on, we will place orders after a proper explanation to our customers now that we understand the factory's production and products and the minimum order amount. We apologise for any trouble we may have caused.
Since we cannot repeatedly ask our customers for order changes, we would like you to inform us on the order conditions ASAP from next time.

修正後
We are very sorry that we are unable to increase the minimum order amount.
We will certainly order autum-winter items next time, so decided to cancel ordering the spring-summer items this time.
From now on, we will place orders after a proper explanation to our customers since we now understand the factory's production and products and the minimum order amount. We apologise for any troubles we may have caused.
Since we cannot repeatedly ask our customers for order changes, we are pleased if you could inform us of the order conditions very clearly from the next time.