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元の翻訳
Thank you for your continuous patronage.

Have you been able to receive the refund?

When you could confirm the receipt, I am very grateful that you could change your evaluation regarding our shop as I have sent the evaluation change request.

We are very sorry for inconvenience we have caused.

We have learned a lot from this issue.

We would like to feedback this experience for operating our shop at eBay.

We look forward to have a deal with you well in future.

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Thank you for your continuous patronage.

Have you been able to receive the refund?

When you confirmed the receipt, we would be very grateful if you could change your evaluation regarding our shop as we have sent the evaluation change request.

We are very sorry for the inconvenience we have caused.

We have learned a lot from this issue.

We would like to feedback this experience for operating our shop at eBay.

We are looking forward to our future business dealings in the days ahead.

元の翻訳
#will
I understood. If I have something I want again, I will contact you.

#golf-xess
If you can obtain them, I will inform the price to Japanese customer.
I am sorry for disturbing, but it is a great help for me if you could confirm whether those can be obtained or not.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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#will
I understood. If there is something I want again, I will contact you.

#golf-xess
If you can obtain them, I will inform the price to the Japanese customer.
I am sorry for disturbing you, but it is a great help for me if you could confirm whether those can be obtained or not.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
This is our proposal.
We have some good quality second-hand goods. It's a 500 dollar product, but because we've regretfully caused you trouble, we are willing to hand it over to you for the special price of 400 dollars.This way you can purchase it for 200 dollars less than it costs new. The box has some scratches and dents, but the product itself is still in very good (mint) state. We would appreciate it if you would take our offer into consideration.

If you want nothing but a brand-new article, we'll fully reimburse you the payed money, so please do not worry.
We are looking forward to a positive reply from your part.

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This is our proposal.
We have some good quality second-hand goods. It's a 500 dollar product, but because we've regretfully caused you trouble, we are willing to hand it over to you for the special price of 400 dollars. This way you can purchase it for 200 dollars less than it costs new. The box has some scratches and dents, but the product itself is still in very good (mint) state. We would appreciate it if you would take our offer into consideration.

In addition, we will reimburse the balance to your PayPal-account at once.↵
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If you want nothing but a brand-new article, we will fully reimburse you the paid money, so please do not worry.
We are looking forward to a positive reply from your part.

元の翻訳
We are running a campaign in which you can get a free $1 Amazon gift card by purchasing this product.
We will send a package including the product and the gift card.

We have sent you the product from Japan's post office by EMS. According to the tracking number ●●, It should have arrived on November 7th. Was the product identical to the ones you wanted. We will be happy to hear any feedback. Thank you for your continued business.

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We are running a campaign in which you can get a free $1 Amazon gift card by purchasing this product.
We will send a package including the product and the gift card.

We have sent you the product from Japan's post office by EMS. According to the tracking number ●●, It should have arrived on November 7th. Was the product identical to the one you wanted? We will be happy to receive any feedback about the product. Thank you for your continued business.

元の翻訳
Greetings.

Thank you for the e-mail.
I appriciate the picture you have attached on it as well.

I'm sorry to tell you that the designs did not match my sense.
No offense.

But I appriciated your kindness.
Please send me an e-mail when you have a new design.

Sincerely,

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Greetings.

Thank you for the e-mail.
I also appreciate the picture you have attached to it.

I'm sorry to tell you that the design did not match my needs.
No offense.

But I appreciate your kindness.
Please send me an e-mail when you have a new design.

Sincerely,

元の翻訳
I have received the item, but have received only one speaker although I have ordered two.
Could you send another speaker as soon as possible?
Thank you.

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I have received the item, but I only received one speaker even though I ordered two.
Could you send another speaker as soon as possible?
Thank you.