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元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for contacting me.
I have figured out the reason why the products had not been received.
Because we did not know your address,
your product had been returned to us.
There is no mistake in the address registered on PayPal?
Our store will do the corresponding two points so,
would you please choose either of the choices.
- Tell us your address, name, and phone number and we will resend your product.
- We will give you a refund
We can respond to either choice immediately.
I am very sorry the goods you had ordered had
not been received when expected.
The transaction of course will be seen through until
the very end so please do not worry.

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Hello
Thank you for your inquiry.
I have figured out the reason why the products had not been received.
Because the delivery service couldn't find your address,
your product had been returned to us.
Is there no mistake in the address registered on PayPal?
Our store will give you two choices to solve this issue as stated below so
would you please choose either of the choices will be most convenient for you.
- Tell us your address, name, and phone number and we will resend your product.
- We will give you a refund
We can respond to either choice immediately.
I am very sorry the goods you had ordered had
not been received when expected.
The transaction of course will be seen through until
the very end, so please do not worry.

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for contacting me.
I have figured out the reason why the products had not been received.
Because we did not know your address,↵
your product had been returned to us.
There is no mistake in the address registered on PayPal?
Our store will do the corresponding two points so,↵
would you please choose either of the choices.
- Tell us your address, name, and phone number and we will resend your product.
- We will give you a refund
We can respond to either choice immediately.
I am very sorry the goods you had ordered had↵
not been received when expected.
The transaction of course will be seen through until↵
the very end so please do not worry.

修正後
Hello
Thank you for contacting me.
I have figured out the reason why the products had not been received.
Because we did not know your address (they used the PayPal-registered address; it's not that they didn't know it), your product had been returned to us.
There is no mistake in the address registered on PayPal?
Our store will do the corresponding two points, so would you please choose either of the choices?
- Tell us your address, name, and phone number and we will resend your product.
- We will give you a refund.
We can respond to either choice immediately.
I am very sorry the goods you had ordered had not been received when expected.
The transaction of course will be seen through until the very end, so please do not worry.

元の翻訳
In preparation for Christmas, I am planning to order 5 additional 「WRAP」's next week. However, because the yen is increasingly become weaker compared to the US dollar, the cost to purchase is going up. I would like to blame the high pricing in Japan, however, compared to the US, Japan's economy isn't doing very well so it is difficult to blame the pricing. Therefore, I wanted to ask if you could perhaps provide me a discount? Please consider this positively, I would like to continue doing business with you in the future. Thank you very much.

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In preparation for Christmas, I am planning to order 5 additional "WRAP"s next week. However, because the yen is increasingly become weaker compared to the US dollar, the cost to purchase is going up. I would like to change the payment condition to the retail cost in Japan, however, compared to the US, Japan's economy isn't doing very well so it is difficult to shift to the retail cost. Therefore, I wanted to ask if you could perhaps provide me a discount? Please consider this positively, I would like to continue doing business with you in the future. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I am not sure where to send the head; would you please tell me the address?

After you check the head at your company, will you send a replacement head?
The address to send the replacement head is listed below.

I have sent it from the address given to me by ebay.
If the address given on ebay is an old address, please send a request for change to ebay.

$732 has been refunded to my PayPal account.
Shall I claim the $224 difference with PayPal?

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I am not sure where to send the head; would you please tell me the address?

After you check the head at your company, will you send a replacement head?
The address to send the replacement head is as follows.

I have sent it to the address given to me by eBay.
If the address given on eBay is an old one, please send a request for change to eBay.

$732 has been refunded to my PayPal account.
Shall I claim the $224 difference with PayPal?

元の翻訳
I am not sure where to send the head; would you please tell me the address?

After you check the head at your company, will you send a replacement head?
The address to send the replacement head is listed below.

I have sent it from the address given to me by ebay.
If the address given on ebay is an old address, please send a request for change to ebay.

$732 has been refunded to my PayPal account.
Shall I claim the $224 difference with PayPal?

修正後
I am not sure where to send the head; would you please tell me the address?

After you checked the head at your company, will you send a replacement head?
The address to send the replacement head is listed below.

I have sent it from the address given to me by ebay.
If the address given on ebay is an old address, please send a request for change to ebay.

$732 has been refunded to my PayPal account.
Shall I claim the $224 difference with PayPal?

元の翻訳
ジャック　マー：なぜ人前で話すのがもっと苦手になってきたか

多分ジャック・マーは聞いた事のある名前でしょう。彼は中国の大企業、アリババ、の会長ですから、特にアジアの技術の世界には彼の言葉には主な力があります。

しかし、多分知らなかった事はジャック・マーは時々ブログすることです。ですから、私は簡単に彼の最近の作品を翻訳してみました。とても洞察力のあるだと思います、メディアでの私達だけではなく、メディアによく話すあなた方にも興味を待たせる作品だと思います。

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Jack Ma：なぜ人前で話すのがもっと苦手になってきたか

多分Jack Ma氏は聞いた事のある名前でしょう。彼は中国の大企業、Alibabaの会長ですから、特にアジアの技術の世界には彼の言葉には影響力があります。

しかし、多分知らなかった事はJack Ma氏は時々ブログすることです。ですから、私は簡単に彼の最近の作品を翻訳してみました。とても洞察力のあるだと思います、メディアでの私達だけではなく、メディアによく話すあなた方にも興味を待たせる作品だと思います。

元の翻訳
This is a very popular photo collection of a French actress, from when she was age 15, during the summer of 1982.

Ghibli Image Board Collection Original Work

It is a portfolio from when before Miyazaki Hayao began animation, when he was still developing his ideas. A very different story from the animation is being told.

Hello.

I'm so sorry my response was so late. On September 9th, through the O-Desk, I have sent an email to you all but I am not sure if you had noticed.

You may believe that the amount of work we are displaying is a bit small, however, this is so there is no mistakes in the exhibit.

I will be waiting for your response.

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This is a very popular photo collection of a French actress, from when she was age 15, during the summer of 1982.

Ghibli Image Board Collection Original Work

It is a portfolio from when before Miyazaki Hayao began animation, when he was still developing his ideas. A very different story from the animation is being told.

Hello.

I'm so sorry my response was so late. On September 29th, through the O-Desk, I have sent an email to you all but I am not sure if you had noticed.

You may believe that the amount of work we are displaying is a bit small, however, this is so there is no mistakes in the exhibit.

I will be waiting for your response.

元の翻訳
七月から九月の間、CareerBuilder 調査は3103人の労働者、2203人のマネージャー、と様々な企業と会社からの人材の専門家が調査対象となりました。
専門的および事業サービズで働いている方が最も頻繁に（３５％）病気欠勤日をとっていました、その次に販売事業で働いている方（３４％）でした。IT、小売、接客業で働いている方が最も少なく病気欠勤日をとりました。
では、２０１４年で仕事を休む一番ばかげた言い訳の欄表。
ほとんどの言い訳は不条理であるほど、信じられると思う事によって言ったようです。だって、このようなばかげた理由は誰も構成しないでしょう？

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CareerBuilder 調査は七月から九月の間の、3103人の労働者、2203人のマネージャー、と様々な企業と様々な規模の会社からの人材の専門家が調査対象となりました。
プロフェッショナルサービスおよびビジネスサービスで働いている人が最も頻繁に（３５％）病気休暇をとっていました、その次に販売事業で働いている方（３４％）でした。IT、小売、接客業で働いている人が病気休暇を取ったのが最も少ない割合でした。
では、２０１４年の一番ばかげた欠勤に対する言い訳のリストです。
ほとんどの言い訳は不条理であるほど、より信憑性があるように聞こえると思って言ったようです。だって、このようなばかげた理由は誰もでっち上げないでしょう？