米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — 付けたレビュー

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< Playguides >
Ticket Piya　http://pia.jp/t/ayu/
Lawson Ticket http://l-tike.com/ayumihamasaki-lawson/
ePlus　http://eplus.jp/ayumi-hamasaki2014/

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< Playguides >
Ticket Pia　http://pia.jp/t/ayu/
Lawson Ticket http://l-tike.com/ayumihamasaki-lawson/
ePlus　http://eplus.jp/ayumi-hamasaki2014/

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Thank you for purchaing our service.

We would appreciate your comment after the product arrives.
Please contact us if you are dissatisfied with the product. We will spare no effort to deal with it, so please do not worry.
We are waiting for you to use our service again.

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Thank you for purchaing through our service.

We would appreciate your comment after the product arrives.
Please contact us if you are dissatisfied with the product. We will spare no effort to deal with it, so please do not worry.
We are waiting for you to use our service again.

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An elegant short style for a mature 14 year old housewife.

A squared off impression created from the flattening of the top, short layered straight hair to give a natural flow to the parting.
From there, the volume positioned to the lip line, to accent the glamorous look. The natural coloring with small highlights brings out the shine.
An all over one curl design, fitting neatly into the neckline
Completed with a soft spray for the perfect adult short hair finish.

Cool adult, soft wave long hair.

A cute and beautifully formed curled bob in the casual adult style.

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An elegant short style for a mature 41 year old housewife.

A squared off impression created from the flattening of the top, short layered straight hair to give a natural flow to the parting.
From there, the volume positioned to the lip line, to accent the glamorous look. The natural coloring with small highlights brings out the shine.
An all over one curl design, fitting neatly into the neckline
Completed with a soft spray for the perfect adult short hair finish.

Cool adult, soft wave long hair.

A cute and beautifully formed curled bob in the casual adult style.

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Thank you for your message.
We are sorry for taking long to update the tracking number information due to the delivery trouble at our end.
It should be reflected in the next few days. Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
This item has already been shipped by air.
We apologize the incoinvenience caused for this delivery delay.
One possibility may be that the item is currently going through the customs. Please check to see if you have received the absense notice.

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Thank you for your message.
We are sorry for taking long to update the tracking number information due to the delivery trouble at our end.
It should be reflected in the next few days. Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
This item has already been shipped by air.
We apologize the inconvenience caused for this delivery delay.
One possibility may be that the item may be currently going through the customs. Please also check to see if you have received the absence notice.

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Thank you very much for your message.
This item has been shipped by SAL.
It will arrive in about two weeks. Haven't you receive it yet?
We will make sure too.

Thank you very much for your message.
This item has already been shipped.
We checked the tracking number but it doesn't appear.
We will contact post office in case there is something wrong on our side.

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Thank you very much for your message.
This item has been shipped by SAL.
It will arrive in about two weeks. Haven't you receive it yet?
We will make sure too.

Thank you very much for your message.
This item has already been shipped.
We checked the tracking number but it doesn't appear.
We will contact post office as it may might be the mistake on our side.

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Calling for Incentive tours in overseas seminars

Chiba International Convention Bureau took part in a seminars: "Indonesia Jakarta Incentive tours to Japan" and "Taiwan Incentive Tours local seminar" held by Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO).

As Indonesia and Taiwan has enormous potential markets for incentive tours, the bureau has sent staffs to the seminars in Indonesia and Taiwan, made a promotion of Chiba prefecture to overseas buyers in order to let them know "MICE City Chiba" and get MICE matters.
The number of travelers from southeast Asia to Japan grows 34.8 percent more compared to the previous year.

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Calling for Incentive tours in overseas seminars

Chiba International Convention Bureau made a promotion by taking part in a seminars: "Indonesia Jakarta Incentive tours to Japan" and "Taiwan Incentive Tours local seminar" held by Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO).

As Indonesia and Taiwan has enormous potential markets for incentive tours, the bureau has sent staffs to the seminars in Indonesia and Taiwan, made a promotion of Chiba prefecture to overseas buyers in order to let them know "MICE City Chiba" and get MICE matters.
The number of travelers from southeast Asia to Japan grows 34.8 percent more compared to the previous year.

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I know that we spoke on the phone a few moments ago but I apologize that we weren't able to to converse that well.
This is to confirm the last part of the conversation details, but there are two people in charge of this project: myself and one more person.↵
Is my coworker supposed to call you on Monday morning?

If that's the case, I apologize for the miscommunication but I will be the only person in charge.

It's difficult to pick up what you're saying on the phone so I gave an incorrect answer.
I hate to trouble you, but I ask for your continued patience and understanding when corresponding with me.

I thank you in advance for your understanding.

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I know that we spoke on the phone a few moments ago but I apologize that we weren't able to to converse that well.
This is to confirm the last part of your conversation details, mentioned that there are two people in charge of this project: myself and one more person, and that my coworker supposed to call you on Monday morning.

If that's the case, I apologize for the miscommunication but I will be the only person in charge.

It's difficult to pick up what you're saying on the phone so I gave an incorrect answer.
I hate to trouble you, but I ask for your continued patience and understanding when corresponding with me.

I thank you in advance for your understanding.