Robin (robin) — もらったレビュー

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Thanks for the contact. I came able to set up SMS with my mobile phone. Can I ask one more question, how do I charge my card by a credit card ? Can you guide me what I need to do for it ?

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Thanks for contact me. I was able to set up SMS with my mobile phone. Just one more question, how do I charge my card by credit card ? Can you tell me what I need to do for it ?

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Though, as you said it must have been some miracle happened that nobody died at the earthquake. It was Monday that I found out about the earthquake. I hadn`t known such a big news though I always check the informations about New Zealand on the internet. I could have called her and listen to her voice to confirm if she`s alright, or if I had flown to New Zealand ealier... I`ve been spending time thinking of such things. If I weren`t this lazy I could have found out much earlier that you two were OK. Now I`m getting to understand the situation by gathering informations using the internet.

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Though, as you said it's a miracle that nobody died from the earthquake. It was Monday that I found out about the earthquake. I hadn't known such a big news for 2 days though I always check the information about New Zealand on the Internet. I could have called her and listen to her voice to confirm if she's alright, or if I had flown to New Zealand earlier... I've been spending time thinking of such things. If I weren't this lazy I could have found out much earlier that you two were OK. Now I'm getting to understand the situation by gathering information using the Internet.