Lang-Chi Yu (ockhams_razor) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
The use of electric heating started in the 1910's and the oldest record of its usage is the leased-service electrothermic equipment of Kyoto Electric Company. A city-wide supply system for electric home heating was put into service and its use has expanded in the 1920s but the user-base remained quite low. The spread of electronic goods besides clothes iron and radio had generally fallen behind in pre-war Japan but it seems that the reason behind the delayed adoption of electric power as heat source is the utilization cost. There are other major energy sources such as agricultural waste and coal. Coal's heat insulation property is quite weak but very cheap and it is produced and utilized in limited regions.

修正後
The use of electric heating started in the 1910's, and the oldest record of its usage is the leased-service electrothermic equipment of Kyoto Electric Company. A city-wide supply system for electric home heating was put into service, and its use has expanded in the 1920's. However, its user base remained quite low. The spread of electrical appliances besides clothes iron and radio had generally fallen behind in pre-war Japan, but it seems that the reason behind the delayed adoption of electric power as heat source is the utilization cost. There are other major energy sources such as agricultural waste and coal. Coal's heat insulation property is quite weak but very cheap, and it is produced and utilized in limited regions.

元の翻訳
Easy Screenshot
You can take a screenshot by pressing "START" button followed by pressing "Power" button and "Volume Down" button for two secnods.
(For some devices, "Power" and "Home" button)
Waiting
Ready
Take Screenshot
Select where to share
Failed to take screenshot due to lake of memory space
Folder Settings
Status Bar Settings
Target application does not exists
Failed to change rotation settings
Change application theme
Change background theme settings

Easy photo crop
Always show photos maximized
Show photos Maximized considering its aspect ratio

修正後
Easy Screenshot
You can take a screenshot by pressing "START" button followed by pressing "Power" button and "Volume Down" button for two seconds.
(For some devices, "Power" and "Home" button)
Waiting
Ready
Take Screenshot
Select where to share
Failed to take screenshot due to lack of memory space
Folder Settings
Status Bar (the topmost place of screen) Settings
Target application does not exist
Failed to change rotation settings
Change application theme
Change background theme settings

Easy photo crop
Always show photos in maximum size
Show photos in maximum size considering its aspect ratio

元の翻訳
There are several patterns in the movement, and it is difficult to determine which one it is, so it is important that you try again and again patiently.

In a coterie magazine, she is usually drawn with the Moriya shirine dwellers, so that they are often called "The Moriya family".

There are stories about them fighting with the Hakurei shrine or getting along with specters in the mountain and so, and there are a wide varaiety of the stories.

Other characters that she often accompanies are, Sanae Kochiya, Suwako Moriya and Byakuren Hijiri.

修正後
There are several patterns in the movement, and it is difficult to determine which one it is. As a result, it is important that you try again and again patiently.

In a coterie magazine, she is usually drawn with the Moriya shrine dwellers, so that they are often called "The Moriya family".

There are a wide variety of stories, including their fighting with the Hakurei shrine and getting along with specters in the mountain.

Other characters that she often accompanies are Sanae Kochiya, Suwako Moriya and Byakuren Hijiri.