New translator (newbie_translator) — 付けたレビュー

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3 (Agreement on mail monitoring while employed)
I understand that your company's information system and information assets all belongs to your company, and upon recognizing the need to protect your company's information system and information assets, I am in agreement and will subject my email to uninterrupted monitoring.

4 (Returning of confidential information upon resignation)
In the event that I resign from your company, I will return all your company's confidential information and recording mediums that I managed and/or possess prior to resignation to my manager.

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3 (Agreement on mail monitoring while employed)
I understand that your company's information system and information assets all belongs to your company, and upon recognizing the need to protect your company's information system and information assets, I am in agreement and will subject my email to uninterrupted monitoring.

4 (Returning of confidential information upon resignation)
In the event that I resign from your company, I will return all your company's confidential information and recording mediums that I managed and/or possessed prior to resignation to my manager.

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I have phoned the store but it is disappointing that it seems to have ran out stock in all the stores within Japan.
And I tried searching in the Japan auction but the ice mint color is no good right?

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I have phoned the store but it is disappointing that it seems to have ran out of stock in all the stores within Japan.
And I tried searching in the Japan auction but the ice mint color is no good right?

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Thank you for responding. I lost track of the previous project. Consequently, we do not have experience with A.
We have used your advise as reference to the reduction of production cost (manpower).
And we understand that you have already left from the role in A. We wil contact X-san for advise in the future if we would like to seek advise regarding A.

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Thank you for responding. I lost track of the previous project. Consequently, we do not have experience with A.
We have used your advise as reference to the reduction of production cost (manpower).
And we understand that you have already left from the role in A. We will contact X-san for advise in the future if we would like to seek advise regarding A.

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Thank you for sending the picture.

There are several products I'm considerring purchasing,
so can you please let me know the price if I were to buy five?
Please review the attached file.

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Thank you for sending the picture.

There are several products I'm considering to purchase,
so can you please let me know the price if I were to buy five?
Please review the attached file.

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The circumstance of the roof top called Sky Deck.

It is the highest open-space observatory in Japan.
However, it might be closed due to the weather condition. Please forgive us.

[Sky Deck opening hours ] 11:00 to 20:00 (Entrance: until 19:30)

But you can also enjoy whole view of Tokyo enough from 52-storied Tokyo City View, without extra charge!
Before the sunset, we recommend you go to the observatory (or the rooftop).

Because, if you do…

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The appearance similar to a rooftop called Sky Deck.

It is the highest open-space observatory in Japan.
However, it might be closed due to the weather condition. Please forgive us.

[Sky Deck opening hours ] 11:00 to 20:00 (Last Entry: until 19:30)

But you can also enjoy whole view of Tokyo from the 52-storied Tokyo City View, without extra charge!
Before the sunset, we recommend you go to the observatory (or the rooftop).

Because, if you do…

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Paper cups and paper bags with sakura-pattern

In 2013, even the paper cups were decorated with sakura-patterns (even for little tasting cups!).
They are made in fine detail with maximum effort; a Japanese-way of work.

Sakura tube cake (food version)

This is sakura tube cake, a standard dish served every year.
Its' pink color is very cute.
Moreover, what's on the cake is actually also a cherry blossom!
They are "pickled cherry blossom".

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Paper cups and paper bags with sakura-pattern

In 2013, even the paper cups were decorated with sakura-patterns (even for little tasting cups!).
They are made in fine detail with maximum effort; a Japanese-way of work.

Sakura tube cake (food version)

This is sakura tube cake, a standard dish served every year.
Its' pink color is very cute.
Moreover, what's on the cake is also an actual cherry blossom!
They are "pickled cherry blossom".

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“SAKURA” series (beverage ver.)

“SAKURA white chocolate” (right) and “SAKURA white chocolate Frappuccino ®” (left)

The pictures are the 2 kinds of Sakura drinks released in spring, 2013.

They are milk-based drinks flavored with cherry syrup and white chocolate, and no coffee.
It is said that ingredients include genuine cherry flowers and leaves.

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“SAKURA” series (beverage ver.)

“SAKURA white chocolate” (right) and “SAKURA white chocolate Frappuccino ®” (left)

The pictures are the 2 kinds of Sakura drinks released in spring, 2013.

They are milk-based drinks flavored with cherry blossom syrup and white chocolate, and no coffee.
It is said that the ingredients include genuine cherry blossom flowers and leaves.

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You did not understand what I meant regarding dishonest.

I mentioned that you were not able to find the product,
but if I was the seller, I would also buy from sites such as ebay or Bestbuy just to have it delivered
and I will not mentioned the truth about not being able to get one.

The picture is the Special edition for PS3 without a doubt.

I have purchased hundred of games. This is the first time I have encountered this type of case.
If you can deliver it to me when I make a purchase then I will give a good evaluation.
Otherwise, I will leave a bad one.

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You did not understand what I meant regarding dishonest.

You mentioned that you were not able to find the product,
but if I was the seller, I would also buy from sites such as ebay or Bestbuy just to have it delivered
and I will not mentioned the truth about not being able to get one.

The picture is the Special edition for PS3 without a doubt.

I have purchased hundred of games. This is the first time I have encountered this type of case.
If you can deliver it to me when I make a purchase then I will give a good evaluation.
Otherwise, I will leave a bad one.

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Thank you always for your sincere support.

I was contacted by the customer on how to removed the negative evaluation.

And since I also do not how, I am contacting your company.

The customer has decided and wished to remove the evaluation for the transaction this time.

It would also trouble me with the evaluation being left as it is so can you kindly inform me on the specific process?

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Thank you always for your sincere support.

I was contacted by the customer on how to remove the negative evaluation.

And since I also do not how, I am contacting your company.

The customer has decided and wished to remove the evaluation for the transaction this time.

It would also trouble me with the evaluation being left as it is so can you kindly inform me on the specific process?

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Thank you for your continuous patronage.

Thank you as always.

I have requesting for the product invoice this time so the export won't be possible if this is not available?
It is difficult to collate all the requested products' invoices.
And there is also this doubt on what this products' invoices are.
And I also do not understand for requesting this as well.

I would like to ask for the answers for these questions.

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Thank you for your continuous patronage.

Thank you as always.

I am requesting for the product invoice this time so the export won't be possible if this is not available?
It is difficult to collate all the requested products' invoices.
And there is also this doubt on what this products' invoices are.
And I also do not understand for requesting this as well.

I would like to ask for the answers for these questions.

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I am sorry for the late email response. Thank you very much for letting me know the facebook account.
I saw the profile photo via a friend's account and I saw a girl appearance so I laughed really hard (laugh).
The body panel being created is a male mold for replicating the FRP. But i don't know if the replication can be successfully done lol
I am worried about the 1:10 track plan ～ I am worried what needs to be done. Please tell me (laugh)

Don't worry about the language barrier and let us enjoy this together.

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I am sorry for the late email response. Thank you very much for letting me know the facebook account.
I saw the profile photo via a friend's account and I saw a girl's appearance so I laughed really hard (laugh).
The body panel being created is a male mold for replicating the FRP. But i don't know if the replication can be successfully done lol
I am worried about the 1:10 track plan ～ I am worried what needs to be done. Please tell me (laugh)

Don't worry about the language barrier and let us enjoy this together.

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It is a setup that matches the skill level and also raises the hourly rate, but more than the raise on the salary itself, it connects to a great motivation by being able to realize a sense of accomplishments and growth and slowly assigning jobs with responsibilities.

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It is a setup that matches the skill level and also raises the hourly rate, but more than the raise on the salary itself, it leads to great motivation by being able to realize a sense of accomplishments and growth and slowly assigning jobs with responsibilities.

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By the way, when will be the rest days for Christmas and New year on your end?

Please let me know the contact information for a different person in charge since I won't be able to contact you when you are on vacation.

We have received an increase in orders so we will be able to make a lot of orders from you moving forward.
Appreciate your support.


Other item
Please wait for a bit more since there has been no response from UPS.
Can you also make a phone call to the following?

So there is a need to do the manual ordering again if the account has not been restored?

Other item
Please let me know where the following feather is being produced.

You mentioned previously that it was Europe but can you tell me the name of the country?

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By the way, when will be the rest days for Christmas and New year on your end?

Please let me know the contact information for a different person in charge since I won't be able to contact you when you are on vacation.

We have received an increase in orders so we will be able to make a lot of orders from you moving forward.
Appreciate your support.


Other item
Please wait for a bit more since there has been no response from UPS.
Can you also make a phone call to the following?

So is there a need to do the manual ordering again if the account has not been restored?

Other item
Please let me know where the following feather is being produced.

You mentioned previously that it was Europe, but can you tell me the name of the country?

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#will
I was greatly relieved when I heard that.
So please proceed with the shipping.

#william
Why are there no listing of the TourIssue on eBay?

#International Sports
Can you send the invoice to the following address since the money transfer cannot be made from Japan to overseas countries via PayPal?

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#will
I was greatly relieved when I heard that.
So please proceed with the shipping.

#william
Why are there no listings of the TourIssue on eBay?

#International Sports
Can you send the invoice to the following address since the money transfer cannot be made from Japan to overseas countries via PayPal?

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Can I obtain your company's accounting audit report?
Our company needs to evaluate the product quality of the supplier.
This is a accounting regulatory requirement.
It would be best to visit and do a direct audit in your company, but it will be difficult to do it regularly.
We want to record the confirmation made to your company's accounting audit report.
Do you have an audit report by an external auditor?
If you don't have one, can you ask from the appropriate person?

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Can I obtain your company's accounting audit report?
Our company needs to evaluate the product quality of the supplier.
This is an accounting regulatory requirement.
It would be best to visit and do a direct audit in your company, but it will be difficult to do it regularly.
We want to record the confirmation made to your company's accounting audit report.
Do you have an audit report by an external auditor?
If you don't have one, can you ask from the appropriate person?

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of your special memories remain in a beautiful gallery with this camera.