Tri Nur Handayani Noergito (nekochan_77) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Of course it would be OK.
The cos in Japan is 15 US Dollar
And, kindly submit the payment within 3 days after winning the tender,↵
because this is a best seller items.

Of course we would proceed this until the delivery date accordingly.

It would be appreciated if you could win the tender.

修正後
Of course it would be OK.
The shipping cos [word confusion] in Japan is 15 US dollars.
Incidentally, please kindly submit the payment within 3 days after you win your bid, because many are asking about this item.

Of course we would proceed [mistranslation] this until the delivery date accordingly.

We would appreciated it if you could win the bid.

元の翻訳
I already informed you in the last email.↵
We would like to do refund because we did a mistake.

How much do you want for refund?
I would do the preparation to do the refund immediately.
And would like to change the the price soon.

修正後
As I already indicated in my last email, I suggested a refund because I made a mistake.

How much do you want for a refund?
I am willing to refund immediately.
Also, I would like you to change your evaluation soon.