momoko_japan_0701 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for making a bid. Since I have an agreement with Japan Post EMS, I cannot use other types of delivery. I have never failed to deliver items, and you will get the item very quickly. Please understand. Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for making a bid (the bid was successful). Since I have an agreement with Japan Post EMS, I cannot use other shipping methods. I have never failed to deliver items, and you will get the item very quickly. Please understand. Thank you.

元の翻訳
WeChatの投資信託は過去に合計30億元（4億8500万米ドル）の利益をを利子支払いで挙げたと、Tencent氏は会社のQQテクノロジーブログの記事で主張した。これは米ドルにして1人あたり平均48.50ドルの利益を得たことになるが、Temcent氏は最も利益を得た者は、過去12ヶ月で7200ドルも稼いだと言う。

信託はWeChatの中で利用可能で、他の中国の銀行の固定預金口座のように金銭をを利用しないことに関しての規定がない。WeChatでの個人の上限は預金で100万元（162,000米ドル）だ。

修正後
WeChatの投資信託は過去に合計30億元（4億8500万米ドル）の利益をを利子支払いで挙げたと、Tencent氏は会社のQQテクノロジーブログの記事で主張した。これは米ドルにして1人あたり平均48.50ドルの利益を得たことになるが、Temcent氏は最も利益を得た者は、過去12ヶ月で7200ドルも稼いだと言う。

この信託はWeChatの中で利用可能で、他の中国の銀行の固定預金口座とは違って、金銭をを利用しないことに関しての規定がない。WeChatでの個人の上限は預金で100万元（162,000米ドル）だ。

元の翻訳
I will give an interim report regarding the delivery.
I requested a delivery agent since I use Fedex this time.
The package has already been delivered to the agent, and it will be shipped soon.

Also, it might not be duty-free this time, just so you know.
When a package is sent to the U.S. from Japan, it goes through customs before delivery; therefore, you might have to pay customs duties.

The one who purchased the package has to pay the customs duties, and we don't know how much it will be when the package is sent. Since you do a lot of shopping, I'm sure you already know that, but I just wanted to let you know just in case.

修正後
This is an interim report on the status of the shipment.
I requested a delivery agent since I use Fedex this time.
The package has already been delivered to the agent, and it will be shipped soon.

Also, it might not be duty-free this time, just so you know.
When a package is sent to the U.S. from Japan, it goes through customs before delivery; therefore, you might have to pay customs duties.

The one who purchased the package has to pay the customs duties, and we don't know how much it will be when the package is sent. Since you do a lot of shopping, I'm sure you already know that, but I just wanted to let you know just in case.