Miyako Sakamoto (miya-fu) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
It is first time for me to be offerd a long staying.
Ofcourse , you are welcome!
Please let me ask some questions.
The questions are about cleaning such as taking out the trash.
Can I clean up you room once a week?
I am thinking about Monday,Wednesday, or Friday.
I'm going to clean up your room in 2 hours while from 11am to 1pm.
Which day do you let me clean up your room?
If you think it is OK, please le me know the day for clean up.
If you clean up your room by yourself, I will give you discount of cleanup fee.

修正後
It is the first time for me to be offered a long staying.
Of course , you are welcome!
Please let me ask some questions.
The questions are about cleaning such as taking out the trash.
Can I clean up you room once a week?
I am thinking about Monday,Wednesday, or Friday.
I'm going to clean up your room for 2 hours from 11am to 1pm.
Which day do you let me clean up your room?
If you think it is OK, please le me know the day for clean up.
If you clean up your room by yourself, I will give you a discount on the cleanup fee.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you so much for your kind response.
Glad to meet such a buyer as you.
After investigation, there is nothing been uninstalled so the malfunction should be happened during the delivery.
It worked properly at the time of your purchase.
Regret that no solid advice could be given.
Suggest to have a check at your nearby music instrument store at your convenience.
We apologize for the inconveniences caused.
Please feel free to contact us again if any further assistance is required.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you so much for your kind response.
Glad to meet such a buyer as you.
An investigation proved that nothing has been uninstalled so the malfunction must have happened during the delivery.
It worked properly at the time of your purchase.
Regret that no solid advice could be given.
Suggest to have it chekced at your nearby music instrument store at your convenience.
We apologize for the inconveniences caused.
Please feel free to contact us again if any further assistance is required.