kensuke.mikuni (micken) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I enveloped the item with vinyl pack you have used when you have shiped it to us.
And we protected it with tapes like the item can't be exposedto outside.
Have the item been naked condition unenveloped?
If it is naked condition, the vinyl pack would be broken by the contents check at the customs.
As the additional security, we enveloped to protect it with air cushion.
If the item was boken, the accident would happen in the shipping.
Naturaly the insurance for the reskhedge should be countermeasure.
We recomend to apply the insurance to your local post office.

修正後
I enveloped the item with vinyl pack you have used when you have shipped it to us.
And we protected it with tapes like the item can't be exposedto outside.
Have the item been naked condition unenveloped?
If it is naked condition, the vinyl pack would be broken by the contents check at the customs.
As the additional security, we enveloped to protect it with air cushion.
If the item was boken, the accident would happen in the shipping.
Naturaly the insurance for the reskhedge should be countermeasure.
We recommend to apply the insurance to your local post office.

元の翻訳
Dear, sorry so much for your trouble made from us.
Your buying products have send at Augast 12th,
although this deliverly is not used tracking service.
Becouse of saving the cost.

If the products don't still arrive at your home,
Please check at your nearest post office whether it arrived at there.
In this case, the products can be kept staying at there.

If it have not arrived at there, we will pay back to you at moment.
You don't need to be care about it.

we will correspond this trade surely with faithful up to finish.

Sorry, but please take it.

修正後
Dear, sorry so much for your trouble made from us.
Your buying products have send at August 12th,
although this deliverly is not used tracking service.
Because of saving the cost.

If the products don't still arrive at your home,
Please check at your nearest post office whether it arrived at there.
In this case, the products can be kept staying at there.

If it have not arrived at there, we will pay back to you at moment.
You don't need to be careful about it.

we will correspond this trade surely with faithful up to finish.

Sorry, but please take it.