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Collaborate goods produced by AMO-chan and E hyphen world gallery has made big popularity!
On E hyphen world gallery NET, you can get variety of ladies items except for the items which E hyphen world gallery official website treats as pre-order sale.

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Collaborate goods produced by AMO-chan and E hyphen world gallery has made big popularity!
On E hyphen world gallery NET, you can get a variety of ladies items except for the items which E hyphen world gallery official fashion mail-order website treats as pre-order sale.

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They have a lot of concerts! It's worth trying!

The Visual style band MEJIBRAY "メジブレイ”'s official web site. The members of 4, Tsuzuku "綴", MiA, Koichi "恋一", Meto "メト".

You may see their information about the profile, news, discography, media, concert schedule, selling goods on the web site.

As foreign music has impacted them, they won't disappoint you even if you dislike Visual style bands.

Their strong sound and vigorous stage performance capture your heart.

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They have a lot of concerts! It's worth experiencing!

The official website of Visual Kei band MEJIBRAY "メジブレイ”. made up of four members Tsuzuku "綴", MiA, Koichi "恋一" and Meto "メト".

You can see official information such as their profile, news, discography, media, concert schedule and merchandise.

As foreign music has strongly influenced them, they won't disappoint you even if you aren't a fan of Visual Kei bands.

Their strong sound and vigorous stage performance capture your heart.

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The points are pattern and shape of nails.

One nail has a real-looking pistol on it.
Lady GaGa's are good examples.

These artistic fashion nailｓ are produced by Aya Fukuda, Japanese Nail Artist. The fashion nail techniques born by Japanese sensitive fingers are almost the world of art.
You may try fashion nails when you visit Japan☆

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al94802

The points are the pattern and shape of nails.

One nail has a real-looking pistol on it.
World-famous Lady GaGa's are the good examples.

These artistic fashion nails of Lady GaGa are produced by Aya Fukuda, a Japanese Nail Artist. Fashion nail techniques created by Japanese sensitive fingers are almost a world of art.
Try the fashion nails when you visit Japan☆